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09' Freestyle diss

Post by -MenaCe- »

I recorded this in like march and literally my dude just found a beat and put it on it was my first time ever hearin let alone spittin on that instrumental...

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on the real that was dope for bein a flow. beat was slick, your flow and presence was on it. some dope lyrics in there.. good drop man
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Thanx
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why is it so quiet but it is pretty dope we'll hav eto get on a track
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Word..

Yo check out my other drop...
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better then anything I have seen Lawgix of Sym do in there life. lmao. Yeah your flows almost always on point, vocals are a little drown out by the beat, lyrics could of been better but the flow was there and thats whats important. good drop.
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so how in menaces drop are lawgix and i spoken about?
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What?
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LunGzZ wrote:better then anything I have seen Lawgix of Sym do in there life. lmao. Yeah your flows almost always on point, vocals are a little drown out by the beat, lyrics could of been better but the flow was there and thats whats important. good drop.
LMAO r u kidding??? yeah Menace is fuckin tight... but i'm STILL waitin for that diss from u lungzz... been what? 2 days??? till then eat a fat dick stfu n don't gloat about somebody bein better than somebody else cause that diss to Sym was horrible even people agreed on that shit... ur trash man... str8 up garbage... and i can't wait to shit on u again... but i'm not doin nething till i see somethin come from ur punk ass... otherwise i shit on u... get the fuck over it... and if u have a thought again about somebody bein sicker then someone else... take a minute... think about it... and just STFU!!! Menace i'll check this shit out later br0... i'm sure its hot... but i'll peep it here inna few fam... peace!
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^^LOL..

Iight Law..
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this is pretty tight fo freestyle dude..i 'll give ya that

the flo was pretty good , and the presence seemed there..
short though...ya vocals are a lil soft in spots but this is aight dude..

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I prefer your audios over your writtens any-day... I mean your steez is grimy.. i'm diggin' it.

..and not to mention that slamin ass beat!

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Feed is appreciated..

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its a good track much props
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thnx.. uppin more feed
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