work in progress

[-TraMaTiK-]

first verse to a new song im writin,just lookin for some feed. ill return it

why u decievein these people why they believin this evil
now they seein its lethal they gotta reason to meet u
thats what my brain keeps sayin can u feel my pain its weighin
down my fuckin frame im prayin that my name is always stayin
in this mist of conversation it digs inside my patience
right where my ribs be placed in aint no fib im never fakin
i wont ever rap a lie talkin about im cappin guys
maybe im just actin wise gotta check my back for knives
cuz i kno the haters well yes they wanna stab me quick
so ill see u later pal u aint gonna grab me bitch
dont think i come across as rude yes i kno i lost my mood
now its time to pay the price but it aint no cost to u
my heart is fuckin cold man listen as the thunder hits
now i start to wonder if im losin whats up under it
2morrows never promised so i had to learn to act
like a man keep on walkin while i start to turn my back

[eMCee Havic]

yeah pretty dope peice man, flowed pretty well. sound pretty dope over a slow beat.

"thats what my brain keeps sayin can u feel my pain its weighin
down my fuckin frame im prayin that my name is always stayin"

those were dope flowed nice


good drop man

peace

[$harky]

yeah Man nice flow and vocab

ill drop. peace