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I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

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I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

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[soundclick]7757514[/soundclick]

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it's not playing
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Re: I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

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You have to click play its playin for me
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It's playing for me, what type of mic you got? Song is good though, lyrics were good, flow was good to! Check you're pms to, ima post up my songs we should get a collab if u like my music to lol.
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ummmm this was pretty sick... the hook was sick as fuck.... ZPT was DOOOOOPE ADotJ u fell off a few times man... verse was okay... but it was good shit tho...
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Re: I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

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Ok i made a soundclick page but when i go to upload a song and browse in "my music" folder my songs aren't showin up..

wtf do i do..
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Re: I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

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First verse isn't good. Pronunciation of words is off, production is decent but the pronunciation throws it off. Lyrics aren't very hard in the first or second verse either...Stuff u always here. Metaphores are horribly played and or bitten as well. (Played like a videogame? You didnt bite it but its been said a million times)...Where was the second guy? I guess you both sounded alike...With some improvement with your pronunciation you guys could be alot better, only minor flow problems to work out.
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Re: I'M BAAACCCKKKK, I SEE THROUGH YOU ZPT ft ADotJ [FIREEE!!!}

Post by drunken jesus »

listening - hooks real mediocre its annoying and not catchy, delivery and flow need some tweaking their are some awkward pauses, voice needs work sounds bad with the delivery, oh this is a collab, the second guy sounds like a more polished version of the first deliverys a lil annoying imo but dude still came nice, overall not bad liked the second guy first guy has potential just needs a bit of work
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