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Arvincible -.vs.- Menace (Arv)

Post by Arvincible »

12 lines-6 bars

hazard cant vote cuz dude too quick to hop on somebody's dick
so that means no dr votes,
all beefs aside, vote right.


basic categories:
punches
personals
flow/multis


lets git it...

-- 22 Jun 2009 23:02 --

oh yeah 24 hours after both check ins

GL


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im here!!
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yo...check it

this dude is fuckin wack!!!!

imma straight up shit-on-his-image i consider-u-scrimmage \\
Its like fuckin Star Wars when i just-get rid-of-this-Menace \\
ur finished, lyrically have ur legs-bein-torn-when-i-spray-son \\
Everyone hates "Men" like Illest was a lesbian-organization \\
n uve gotten-sponsors? offin niggas cockin n poppin rocket- launchers? \\
Yea right bitch! ill come n "pik-atchu"like u was some 'pocket-monster!!' \\
Pussy, only the strong survive, its in my nature to drop-this-weakling \\
Now my punches have "Mena-paused"..... in his attempt to stop-the-bleeding! \\
Im heavy weight, an anvil, the flow lightin u up like candle-fire \\
Ill bury this garbage in a landfill when i put u to sleep like tranquilizer!! \\
ull always suck like pacifiers, why accept when u aint as ill-as-Arv? \\
Now im spillin spew, venomous vomit killin u, leave ya beat by filler-bars... \\




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Post by -MenaCe- »

And Here We Go!!

This lil bitch poppin shit needs to acknoledge this dominance/
under pressure he folds his fraim can't hold lots of it/
Plus you are visably old history at that/
ya punches are rottin to the bone lucky if ya hits'll be intact/
A Vet Shit?! Bet this when mine connect you'll be scarred instantly in fact/
its sickning you brought it back wit 86' schemes so this means its a rap!!!/
dont get it twisted if its simplfied just apply/
the only thing holdin ya soakin lines together is them symbols guy!!
you shouldn't be able to post a challenge wit no talent/
you have to see you aint half as me tryin to walk my walk wit no balance/
i mean nice try but ya rhymes dont make as much noise as mine/
so to finish it listen strict just forget you ever spit at a point a time!!/
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K vote up
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Re: Arvincible -.vs.- Menace

Post by ReCkinAll »

I Gotta Break This One Down.......



Arv:

imma straight up shit-on-his-image i consider-u-scrimmage \\
Its like fuckin Star Wars when i just-get rid-of-this-Menace \\
-You Started off ok but the menace part killed it...
ur finished, lyrically have ur legs-bein-torn-when-i-spray-son \\
Everyone hates "Men" like Illest was a lesbian-organization \\
-Not really feelin it....
n uve gotten-sponsors? offin niggas cockin n poppin rocket- launchers? \\
Yea right bitch! ill come n "pik-atchu"like u was some 'pocket-monster!!' \\
-Hell no wtf man lol
Pussy, only the strong survive, its in my nature to drop-this-weakling \\
Now my punches have "Mena-paused"..... in his attempt to stop-the-bleeding! \\
-Ok i guess 4/10
Im heavy weight, an anvil, the flow lightin u up like candle-fire \\
Ill bury this garbage in a landfill when i put u to sleep like tranquilizer!! \\
-ok
ull always suck like pacifiers, why accept when u aint as ill-as-Arv? \\
Now im spillin spew, venomous vomit killin u, leave ya beat by filler-bars... \\
-Weak Closer(Your filler barz messed you up actually)

MenaCe:


This lil bitch poppin shit needs to acknoledge this dominance/
under pressure he folds his fraim can't hold lots of it/
-ok opener nothin special tho
Plus you are visably old history at that/
ya punches are rottin to the bone lucky if ya hits'll be intact/
A Vet Shit?! Bet this when mine connect you'll be scarred instantly in fact/
its sickning you brought it back wit 86' schemes so this means its a rap!!!/
-Nice wordplay and personal
dont get it twisted if its simplfied just apply/
the only thing holdin ya soakin lines together is them symbols guy!!
-ok good point
you shouldn't be able to post a challenge wit no talent/
you have to see you aint half as me tryin to walk my walk wit no balance/
-ok
i mean nice try but ya rhymes dont make as much noise as mine/
so to finish it listen strict just forget you ever spit at a point a time!!/
-nice closer



Punches-MenaCe
Multi's-Tie
Personals-Tie
Creativity-MenaCe
Nameplay-Arv
Flow-Tie


Overall:MenaCe

This was nothing really special after reading it but if i had to say menace really aint that nice but he does just edge my vote on his battles for some reason, arv you dropped ok but them filler barz killed you worse then menace did....
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Post by MOEstradamus »

^^^^does this kid know what hes lookin for in votes?^^^^

Punches-Arvincible his were better in my eyes like the mime line was weak for you menace
Multi's-Arvincible kid his Arv's were more complex and better
Personals-Arvincible
Creativity-Arvincible the star wars line and pocket monster was good
Nameplay-Arvincible
Flow-they both had good flow

Man the battle i seen Arv had a solid verse and was stronger in every aspect to Menaces

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Post by - Mutual - »

^ i agree

Punches- Arvincible- the mena pause line won that ish
Multi's- defoo ARV
Personals-Tie
Creativity- Arv with the pik atchu line lol
Nameplay- ARV
Flow- ARV

imo ARV won

Vote - Arv
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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dang...

no comment on the 1-5 record holder reckinall

but thanks for the votes...


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honestly i'm not going to break this one down....
Arv sweeped all the cats except flow...no hate to menace..Arv's
verse was just more advanced...he had way more multi's and punches...and i hate pokemon punches, but that shit was pretty ill...haha

my vote for-ARV
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ArV cat swept this it should be a 3-O ko...Menace and Reckinall have the same IP Adress........
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And ...
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Post by Teflon »

What do you mean they have the same Ip Adress? Does that mean they're the same person or what? ANd if so take away a vote in my battle kind of odd every battle Menace has Reckin votes for him but whatever if its legit whatever if not just someone handle my thread please.
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yea i wondered how he thought menace beat that i mean really no homo but arv always drops good
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Re: Arvincible -.vs.- Menace

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3-0 K.O.

Reckinall's vote is disregarded.

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