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a quik freestyle

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feed will be returned
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: a quik freestyle

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if this is a str8 free like you say, than its dope. dug the beat. lyrics were fire. another sym classic for sure.
i could tell you got skills homie, flowing is the only way to tell skills i think, and in that perpect your skilled ..
dope drop homie

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-- Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:43 am --

damn i said skills skill and skilled :roll:
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Re: a quik freestyle

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yeah its mos def a free... smoked a joint and had a realization that i needed to spit.. lol

thanx for the feed

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honestly u need a rawer clearer delivery i barely hear the punches all i realiZe is the multi work which was pretty insane just spit more punctual u gotta be ur own hype man and spit with more personality like when u say something say it how you would in a conversation when u get mad get mad when u get cocky get cocky when u ask a question do it in that tone ya know what i mean cassidy and jay-z do it best if u need reference ta what im saying
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Re: a quik freestyle

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mayne dope beat
the multies were fire aswell
the flow i found nice aswell
this was one completely dope song overall a nice freestyle
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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yeah i know my delivery ain right yet, but thanx for the tips ill keep that in mind the next time i step in the booth man... appreciate the feed

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Re: a quik freestyle

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hey this shit goes pretty damn hard kid...
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