A Long Read, but its ona high level like Bong Weed!!!!

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Dec 08, 2006 2:52 am

i keep my brain clouded wit weed smoke,
the beef though jus feeds ghost so keep notes,
my keyed flows, are dope like kilos,
im sweet yo like a chick that deep throats,
ill brake the spine of a rook, so "fly straight"
you write a few lines and a hook, yuh "rhyme rate"
sux and call yaself an mc wit no reguards to the time that it took,
you write the type of shit that can be found in a book,
you couldnt spit 16 yet alone an 8 bar verse,
the games are curse, wit lames that search,
to see who wins by who pulls the race card first,
my straight hard work, will leave you placed ina graveyard turf,
ill keep it real, cuz secrets kill, ill let you see this skill,
the skills that get people killed, like eatin pills,
teens who will, search for the cheapest thrill,
so weakness till, the evilness fills you up wit the deepest guilt,
so check it ive built, an unbreakable wall,
my rhymes are portrayin the fall,
of christ when he was savin them all,
greatness is set as default, it aint my fault,
im raw, chain saws aint got shit on whats in my vault,
i wrestle wit flows, i spit wit electrical volts,
ya shit aint measurin up like usin metrical bolts,
i dont follow a chain of command, im a king,
i hollow the game wit my hand, without rhymin a thing,
it seems like you need timin to bring,
shine in, well im shinin like rocks ina watch and diamonds in rings,
yall will prolly say this aint the hottest from ghost,
but its the longest i wrote, ive fathered the g.o.a.t, (greatest of all time)
and i can give a fuck if you give this a flop,
ill twist you in knots, wit the shit that i drop,
make you flip and then flop,
snap your wrist and then watch,
you stop, im hot, im meltin the steel when i piss in that pot.......

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~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Dec 08, 2006 2:53 am

show weakness till****

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Dec 08, 2006 4:47 am

i fixed it

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Fri Dec 08, 2006 3:44 pm

not bad.. me and u should cypher sometime.. it'd get interesting lol

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Fri Dec 08, 2006 4:02 pm

a few bars on this were worded kinda awkward like you stopped on scheme and only rhymed the end and messed up the flow but overall this was a nice piece

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:11 am

yeah every verse can use some adjustments, theres no such thing as a perfect verse, but thanx for the feed back

Street Pharmacist · Post by **Street Pharmacist** » Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:30 am

this was good lol

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 1:26 pm

thanx yall, its appreciated

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Tue Dec 12, 2006 5:30 pm

Damn, Shit Was Dope Homie. Old MSN Shit man..haha Keep Doin Ya Thing Homie.

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Wed Dec 13, 2006 3:40 pm

nice verse......no such thing as bong weed....ne weed smoked out of a bong will get u high as fuck!!...lol

Invincible · Post by **Invincible** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 11:45 pm

yeah it fell off..I didn't like it

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 2:00 am

how did it fall off faggot

A Long Read, but its ona high level like Bong Weed!!!!

A Long Read, but its ona high level like Bong Weed!!!!

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