BL#4 Modern Defiance vs --CUETE-- (MD 3-0 KO)

[K KiLLaH]

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Due Next Week (6/26/09)

*Ok Battle Fans This Week We HAve --CUETE-- Taking on Modern Defiance of Of Illest's Most Recognized Lyricists In the Scripture Thread. Will --CUETE--'s 1st Battle Be His 1st Vic? Stay Tuned n Find Out*

[eMCee Havic]

checkity check check

[--CUETE--]

Check

-- Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:12 pm --

Like His LOW SELF-ESTEEM I'll Leave His PRIDE lookin Bleek
A 3rd RightHook To His Cheek-He Jus Got KO'D Twice This Week!
You Suck-Admit It!-Why Else You Lookin At Oh And Two (0-2)
N I Ain't Gotta Be An 'insTRUmental' To BEAT Right Thru You! *
Ain't Got No Fight In You-So How You A MODERN "DEFIANCE"??
Only Shit Defiant Bout You Is Your Dick-Suckin Reliance
Way You Gettin Fucked In Battles-U Must Like It Like A Queer
You Ain't STREET-Cus Like Your SIG-U Ain't Nothin To Fear!
Lemme Make Shit Clear--Leave The MIC ALONE Like Your Avatar
Cus Only You Can Spit A 5min Tracks N Ain't Spit A Decent Bar! *

N Fuck Your Ego! 'Cause NO WINS=equals=NO SWAGGER
Ur Rhymes Are DULL-"You Couldn't CUT It If You Were A Fuckin DAGGER"


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1st * http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/instr ... 13472.html

2nd * http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/moder ... 12219.html

[eMCee Havic]

yo,

its written murder..

so you got "Cool edit pro" so now you think-you-can-flow
cut through your hull like a torpedo and be sinkin-your-boat
crushin your skull i know "violence "isn't" in-your-blood
have you lookin at your avatar screamin I pretend-to-be-thug
in the end-he-will-love my verse askin me please-teach-me
then sulking away from the battlefied like damn He-Beat-ME!!
so keep-speaking and run out of breath like "Hearse-Chase"
in a hurendous audio comp "diss track" would get first-place
listened to em an heard-rape playing out on shitty-beats
Cuete's hardly cute never won so i'll make up a quick-defeat

youll quickly-see on this "killn field" your words-fall-cold
You winnin i'm the neddle to your bubble gon to burst-false-hope

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"Killn fied"- a verse he wrote in the scripture
"Diss" a horrible audio he did
"Hearse Chase" - a verse he did were he ran out of breath


uppin for votes

[-MenaCe-]

--CUETE--

Like His LOW SELF-ESTEEM I'll Leave His PRIDE lookin Bleek
A 3rd RightHook To His Cheek-He Jus Got KO'D Twice This Week!
-Weak Opener could have been alot better
You Suck-Admit It!-Why Else You Lookin At Oh And Two (0-2)
N I Ain't Gotta Be An 'insTRUmental' To BEAT Right Thru You!
- *Weak Punch, come on son!
Ain't Got No Fight In You-So How You A MODERN "DEFIANCE"??
Only Shit Defiant Bout You Is Your Dick-Suckin Reliance
-Nice Personal
Way You Gettin Fucked In Battles-U Must Like It Like A Queer
You Ain't STREET-Cus Like Your SIG-U Ain't Nothin To Fear!
-ok i guess leanin to weak
Lemme Make Shit Clear--Leave The MIC ALONE Like Your Avatar
Cus Only You Can Spit A 5min Tracks N Ain't Spit A Decent Bar!
-ok *

N Fuck Your Ego! 'Cause NO WINS=equals=NO SWAGGER
Ur Rhymes Are DULL-"You Couldn't CUT It If You Were A Fuckin DAGGER"
-Very Played line bad closer wtf
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Modern Defiance

so you got "Cool edit pro" so now you think-you-can-flow
cut through your hull like a torpedo and be sinkin-your-boat
-started off ok but endin alittle weak
crushin your skull i know "violence "isn't" in-your-blood
have you lookin at your avatar screamin I pretend-to-be-thug
-funny
in the end-he-will-love my verse askin me please-teach-me
then sulking away from the battlefied like damn He-Beat-ME!!
-ok
so keep-speaking and run out of breath like "Hearse-Chase"
in a hurendous audio comp "diss track" would get first-place
-ok personal
listened to em an heard-rape playing out on shitty-beats
Cuete's hardly cute never won so i'll make up a quick-defeat
-poorly put together
youll quickly-see on this "killn field" your words-fall-cold
You winnin i'm the neddle to your bubble gon to burst-false-hope
-Decent closer

Overall i feel that Modern's verse made more sense and was put together better and he was alittle more personal also and for --cuete-- i was really expectin to read some shit son but it was kinda the other way around ya punches where there but did not land right, so just work on that and you'll be good, but anywayz....


V/Modern Defiance

[K KiLLaH]

punches:MD
flow:MD

everything else tie

vote:MD

[eMCee Havic]

2-0 uppin

[MOEstradamus]

Cuete
Like His LOW SELF-ESTEEM I'll Leave His PRIDE lookin Bleek
A 3rd RightHook To His Cheek-He Jus Got KO'D Twice This Week!
Mulits off and weak opener 1/5
You Suck-Admit It!-Why Else You Lookin At Oh And Two (0-2)
N I Ain't Gotta Be An 'insTRUmental' To BEAT Right Thru You! *
ok week punch but it made since and flowed decent 2/5
Ain't Got No Fight In You-So How You A MODERN "DEFIANCE"??
Only Shit Defiant Bout You Is Your Dick-Suckin Reliance
nice try at the name play but ur set ups killin me 2/5
Way You Gettin Fucked In Battles-U Must Like It Like A Queer
You Ain't STREET-Cus Like Your SIG-U Ain't Nothin To Fear!
another weak punch 1/5
Lemme Make Shit Clear--Leave The MIC ALONE Like Your Avatar
Cus Only You Can Spit A 5min Tracks N Ain't Spit A Decent Bar! *
that was a good punch and personal 3/5
N Fuck Your Ego! 'Cause NO WINS=equals=NO SWAGGER
Ur Rhymes Are DULL-"You Couldn't CUT It If You Were A Fuckin DAGGER"
that was a weak and played closer 1/5

ok man you need to check your flow and your set up because it gets mea a little confused wen i read it try a beat to smooth it out


Modern Defiance
so you got "Cool edit pro" so now you think-you-can-flow
cut through your hull like a torpedo and be sinkin-your-boat
ok to me that didn't flow at all you 1/5
crushin your skull i know "violence "isn't" in-your-blood
have you lookin at your avatar screamin I pretend-to-be-thug
your multi didn't line up nice punch tho 2/5
in the end-he-will-love my verse askin me please-teach-me
then sulking away from the battlefied like damn He-Beat-ME!!
ok you used me to much in that lol 2/5
so keep-speaking and run out of breath like "Hearse-Chase"
in a hurendous audio comp "diss track" would get first-place
good punch and personal 3/5
listened to em an heard-rape playing out on shitty-beats
Cuete's hardly cute never won so i'll make up a quick-defeat
weak punch but you landed one 2/5
youll quickly-see on this "killn field" your words-fall-cold
You winnin i'm the neddle to your bubble gon to burst-false-hope
decent closer 2/5

looks like you did your homework on this kid and you tryed to be more creative you should be proud of this win

Vote Modern Defiance

[K KiLLaH]

3-0 KO goes to MD... i expected more from you --Cuete-- i seen better in the shoutbox oh well better look next time

[Haz]

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