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Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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WWWOOOOOOWWWWW its been a fuckin minute but i'm back in full effect!!!!!! this is a new track i wrote n recorded... its for a girl i know who ruined our friendship for 2 years... so check it out lemme know what u think... thanx!!!!!!!
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shits ill man.....

VI 4 life

but fo real man.. i felt this a lot. lyrics concept and delivery. nice representation of the VI
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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aye mayne this is dope
fire with the lyrics

we needa to get on a track mayne my new mixtape FULL EFFECT is half done an i need a couple collabs on it
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by Lawgix »

thanx guys!!!!!!

Sym... Verbal Intell Till I Fuckin Die!!!!!!

Mutual... appreciate the offer but maybe we can do it like this... i'll make somethin for the illest mixtape and we'll call it even??? cause i'm sure ur lookin for tracks for that beast!!!! i'd love to hop on it man... i'ma leave u some feed on ur track u did for IL... thanx for the feed guys i'm uppin for some more on my comeback!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by Dead Silence »

u remind me of me
like about the concepts you write about
and the beats u choose
we should def so a track together

this is prob ur best so far
lyrics were superior to ur other tracks
keep em coming
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

verbal intel my nutsack u lopsided bitch


nah this was koo, delivery was straight. lyrics were koo, beat was straight, overall i liked it n didn't want to kill myself so big props to that, on a side note.. verbal intel can bathe in a tub of my own piss, nice track
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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aiight mayne no collab hope u do a track within the next two weeks tho cus it droppin hopefully 24th june
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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me n sym are gonna work on one... for the IL track and thanx for all the feedback... wtf is Muchacho Man???
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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Ekoms now known as a wrestler from NWO the wrestling group
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by eMCee Havic »

this shit was dope dude, good delievery, beat was sick. those beats always hit hard. you rode the beat damn good. production was good but could of been better. overall a dope song. pretty deep lyrics they made me think.

8.5/10

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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by --CUETE-- »

Yeah, I'm Likin This Beat, Its Got A Nice Melody.
Lyrics Fit The Sound Well, It's An Emotional Piece.
Flow Is On Point.

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- Mutual - wrote:Ekoms now known as a wrestler from NWO the wrestling group
lmao that explains it... still uppin...

-- Sat Jun 06, 2009 7:00 pm --

still uppin for some more feedback please!!!!! :D
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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ay yo...this shit is fire..i liked most of ya flo..
beat and hook are off da chain...im feelin this one..
lyrically it's rock solid though..small rythm switch at the very end of the last verse was the only thing that actually stood out in a bad way IMO..i had to repeat that shitthough..Major Orops 4 this.....1
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

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thanx fam highly appreciated i see u still hold the belt i'd like to take a shot at it one of these days... if thats cool with u
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Re: Lawgix - Stranger To Me

Post by insTRUmental »

yea it was some aight shit ..
better than a lot of these popcorn ass 'rappaz' i see around..

i would check you out again somtime on tha strength
ya track was tight and rich wit different sounds, the sample worked, and ya flow was on point ..

it wasnt like no radio quality type shyt, as far as the production itself, but then..i dont think it was meant to be..


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