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Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale

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Yo cuzz,
Under the bright city lights, she shines unbelievable
Something kinda like this dime was unconceivable
I seen it through, your eyes, son, indeed im fuzed
Beat up and stranded she put a bandage on your bleeding wounds
She changed your diapers and would feed you food
Now you pushin a two, seater, coop, breezing through
Like you mobbin, all your problems untreatable
Got a fat rock, but now the black top is mad hot
You have props, a fresh fade, gold chain, a fat watch
Seventeen with a kid, u a mirror image of her
When she was a fiend on the strip, just needed a hit of somethin
The face of a queen, with the spirit of a hustler in her
Facing her dreams, after night school she would rush you dinner
The only one who ever saw something in ya
Now you got a pistol, like u ready to buck a nigga?
Going out for a couple figures? What the fuck nigga??
Aint showin no love back, too much disrespect
Plus she found where your drugs at and that u slung crack
Why does all the bad shit happen to follow her?
And that’s ya problem bruh, cuz that’s ya mama bruh

Your mama loves you, even through
All the drama, and all the trouble
She’s still there to hug you
She taught you bout the struggle
She taught you how to hustle
Place no one above you
There aint no love like ya mamas man


Nigga, I watched you from the project steps
Ya mama stressed, while u was out there holdin chrome
I was smoking bones loaded off the vodka and cess
Heard you bout to put a read dot on a nigga head
Cuz he snitched on ya man and had drama with the feds
Ya mama upset, she wants u to go to college instead
You ditchin school everyday, I seen you run the streets
Makein money in any way, getting niggas done for cheap
Grew a couple feet, runnin the underground, and all that’s underneath
A nigga bitter, but you lookin for somethin sweet
Don’t go home, cuz all ya problems never ceased
And ya mama’s up beat, she need a hit of somethin cheap
Your boy sold it to her had her fixing to get high
While yall was livin to get by, and yall aint even finished mid-high
And how could I forget why, so load up a cartridge
You either show love or heartless, in the thug and drug markets
A narcist, bout to de-part, from under your mamas arm pits
In a deep thought, I contemplated trying to keep her tears from flowin
Then the heat sparked, so keep watch another street moms
Lost her seed, shot up on the streets where she’d fiend rock
Indeed I seen shots, I never thought you bounce before ya moms
Everyday she cryin hard, yesterday they kicked her out the salon
Cuz her son is gone, and he was young, no doubt he strong
For real son, Ill be shoutin ya name out my mouth when its on
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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Re: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale

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Under the bright city lights, she shines unbelievable
Something kinda like this dime was unconceivable
-NICE OPENER
I seen it through, your eyes, son, indeed im fuzed
Beat up and stranded she put a bandage on your bleeding wounds
-OK
She changed your diapers and would feed you food
Now you pushin a two, seater, coop, breezing through
-BLAH
Like you mobbin, all your problems untreatable
Got a fat rock, but now the black top is mad hot
You have props, a fresh fade, gold chain, a fat watch
-COULD'VE WENT HARDER
Seventeen with a kid, u a mirror image of her
When she was a fiend on the strip, just needed a hit of somethin
The face of a queen, with the spirit of a hustler in her
Facing her dreams, after night school she would rush you dinner
The only one who ever saw something in ya
Now you got a pistol, like u ready to buck a nigga?
Going out for a couple figures? What the fuck nigga??
-FELL OFF COMPLETELY HERE
Aint showin no love back, too much disrespect
Plus she found where your drugs at and that u slung crack
-OK I GUESS
Why does all the bad shit happen to follow her?
And that’s ya problem bruh, cuz that’s ya mama bruh
-DONT LIKE THAT
Your mama loves you, even through
All the drama, and all the trouble
She’s still there to hug you
She taught you bout the struggle
She taught you how to hustle
Place no one above you
There aint no love like ya mamas man
-I LIKE THAT

Nigga, I watched you from the project steps
Ya mama stressed, while u was out there holdin chrome
I was smoking bones loaded off the vodka and cess
Heard you bout to put a read dot on a nigga head
Cuz he snitched on ya man and had drama with the feds
Ya mama upset, she wants u to go to college instead
-NICE
You ditchin school everyday, I seen you run the streets
Makein money in any way, getting niggas done for cheap
Grew a couple feet, runnin the underground, and all that’s underneath
A nigga bitter, but you lookin for somethin sweet
Don’t go home, cuz all ya problems never ceased
And ya mama’s up beat, she need a hit of somethin cheap
-KINDA WEAK AND YOU SAID "CHEAP" TWICE
Your boy sold it to her had her fixing to get high
While yall was livin to get by, and yall aint even finished mid-high
-BLAH
And how could I forget why, so load up a cartridge
You either show love or heartless, in the thug and drug markets
-NICE
A narcist, bout to de-part, from under your mamas arm pits
-I LIKE THAT
In a deep thought, I contemplated trying to keep her tears from flowin
Then the heat sparked, so keep watch another street moms
Lost her seed, shot up on the streets where she’d fiend rock
Indeed I seen shots, I never thought you bounce before ya moms
Everyday she cryin hard, yesterday they kicked her out the salon
Cuz her son is gone, and he was young, no doubt he strong
For real son, Ill be shoutin ya name out my mouth when its on
-WEAK CLOSER MAN


tHIS DROP COULD HAVE BEEN ALOT BETTER I THINK YOU HAD GOOD INTENSIONS BUT MORE TOWARDS THE END IT WAS LIKE YOU WERE JUST RAMBLIN ON AND STRUGGLIN AND I REALLY DONT LIKE WHEN YOU REPEATED YOURSELF THAT KINDA TELLS ME YOUR NOT THAT CREATIVE....

GOOD ATTEMPT JUSS GO HARDER NEXT TIME.....
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Re: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale

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I read the first one n thought it was sick ill be back to rate the second one and give a more thorough feed on the first drop
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Re: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale

Post by ugly »

well the reck guy basically broke it down so I dont kno wat to tell you mane

elevate, stay active, keep flowin in the cypher
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