melancholy guitar based jawn in arabic scale
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Arabian Knights
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Arabian Knights
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Re: Arabian Knights
not really my style of beat, but i got to say its kinda unique
kinda trippy really but thats what i see.
definately using your dome for inspiration, i like the fact it has guitar in it too. still i'd like to see some other new shit from ya. with more guitar, scales and finger picking those beats are tight.
i give a 6/10
keep um coming though for sure
kinda trippy really but thats what i see.
definately using your dome for inspiration, i like the fact it has guitar in it too. still i'd like to see some other new shit from ya. with more guitar, scales and finger picking those beats are tight.
i give a 6/10
keep um coming though for sure
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Re: Arabian Knights
aint really feelin the beggining
the beat picks up well tho
but seems a bit out of orderly
too cluttered or sumin i dunno
wasnt bad but not really my thang
the beat picks up well tho
but seems a bit out of orderly
too cluttered or sumin i dunno
wasnt bad but not really my thang
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Re: Arabian Knights
too cluttered is right,
actual intro of beat is too long..
the backing rhythum isn't great either, i'd like to either hear this sped up, or slowed down with a decent bumpin' drum to get your head nodding..
this sounds more like a backing for a rock track than hip hip, maybe thats whats intended?
it does have that arabian feel tho
keep doing..
actual intro of beat is too long..
the backing rhythum isn't great either, i'd like to either hear this sped up, or slowed down with a decent bumpin' drum to get your head nodding..
this sounds more like a backing for a rock track than hip hip, maybe thats whats intended?
it does have that arabian feel tho
keep doing..
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Re: Arabian Knights
basically, i originally had just the guitar layed down & a simple drumline so it sounded more funk than rock/rap, but then went back to it and gave it a rock feel added strings along with the guitar and rearranged the melody in arabic scaleMagicMark wrote:this sounds more like a backing for a rock track than hip hip, maybe thats whats intended?
it does have that arabian feel tho
keep doing..
good looking out on all the feed, i'll drop something more rap oriented next
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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