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cold as ice feat b-1

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jus a couple hr track me and my brotha did
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: cold as ice feat b-1

Post by drunken jesus »

beat is doo doo why didn't you just use the MOP version? shit sounds like a horrible knockoff of it lol

your voice isn't as high pitched which is good but both ya'lls delivery is lacking, not a real strong presence at all vocals are too low and muffled at points too, flows seem straight for the most part

you need to cop a decent mic, you can get a dynamic mic that sounds 100x better for less than a $100
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Re: cold as ice feat b-1

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was a bit muffled in places
flowed well both of ya
need a better mic like DJ said
i liked the beat sorta
the lyrics seemed nice
from what i could hear
overall not a great song
but nice attempt tho
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Re: cold as ice feat b-1

Post by Lawgix »

this was pretty nice B-1's verse was really whack imo... but thats me... Ghost as always u pulled thru with ur lyrics and sound man... this was pretty str8 i'd tell B-1 to redo his verse... give it a 7/10
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