casket roth

[Lotus]

yeaaa i goes in, like a killer I go out,
all the competition, jus watch em get blown out,
code brown,
im flushin that other shit n watchin it go down,
if i could breathe through my ears, id rather jus go drown,
no sound,
cut the lights, you aint fit to pick up the mic..
all ya shit's pussy, thas why I say FUCK what you write,
only fux wit other pussies, kinda like a fuckin dike,
"I love college" was ya first and only track that someone liked,
yeah, fuck Asher Roth wit his whackass bars...
needa get back to class, cuz when it comes to rap, ya lost..
ya had ya shot,
but when my boy copy's on the mic, you should be backin off,
you're a burrito dude, everything you rap is soft,
puttin out gimmick tracks, actin bomb,
you aint gona blow up,
you jus came n showed up wit no nuts,
sorry kid, the shows done... actin laid back,
noone gives a FUCK if you smoke blunts,
asleep in the bread aisle only means that you get NO crumbs...
haha... you should STAY in college son, ya style's dumb..
ya flow sucks, n me I gotta solid one,
hey, at least you tried for fun,
n when it comes to dough, yo gonna die wit none..
shit.. who the fuck signed this chump?
Someone broke his spirit n he put on a cast,
Someone wrote his lyrics n he put on a mask,
He should face the fact,
he's whack as fuck n no image could alter that,
any money he makes, people are gonna want it back,
cats buy ya album, skip through all the tracks, n call it trash…
stop thinking you a real MC jus cuz ya want some cash…
...lil fraudulent fag

idk bored jus starting writin to an instrumental n came out wit this

[GrimBlaze]

Someone broke his spirit n he put on a cast,
Someone wrote his lyrics n he put on a mask,

^^^i like that right there.

nice flow throughtout the whole piece.
only thing was it had a few too many filler bars but otherwise this was cool.

.1.

[YoungK2]

This was nice, flow was on point lyrics were dope good shit...

But Asher's dope

[Dynamiq]

i didnt like the fact that you were trying to diss the guy..u could have been original copywrite already pulled this but it was average..not that nice in my eyes..try and fix up the way you setup your bars for attack mode..they dont meet up equally. inconsistent on some turns.

other than that decent drop.