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drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:51 am

i wrote this in like 5 minutes to some fag named constance subsist told me i was battling, but then it turned out he declined because doesn't battle rap he only love poem battles

i strike with the speed of six runners tryna defeat or challenge me?
"g.o.a.t. beast-i-ality" is the only way you could "see the kid come up"
and you ain't "fucking with me" i'll have this lame ducking in streets
while i got his slut on her knees using "no hands" like a soccer player
i got the paper and lots a flavor your only "constant" is nonsense
content thats garbage how you brag and bluff writing poems you faggot punk
every one sounding sad as fuck whats wrong fag dont have no dad to hug?
or cause girls laughed at ya cause they heard you rapped wack as fuck
so don't try the tough talk b s please you little depressed geek
just walk, cause the most action you seen was waiting in line for a p s 3
looking through your battles besides wack poems its all topics thats weak
fuck battling just look in the mirror homie you need some "topical" cream
up all night this lames pantless writing gay stanzas to sage francis
thinking you an artist? i'll bash your face into ya paint canvas
quit writing like an offbeat jew calling it poetry that trash is lame son
give ya concrete shoes and put ya in the lake ya jacked ya name from
kid how many drugs did ya sniff thinking you really want it with this
kanye said "jesus walks" but if you haven't noticed i'm "running this shit"

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:08 pm

plex sent me this on msn, its dope man
lol i like that ps3 line, and some others

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:34 pm

thanks, kinda pissed me off when the homo backed out of it so i figured i might as well post it here

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:43 pm

yea lol, it was someone from rapbattles.com wasnt it?

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:57 pm

yeah, like 75% of the board is failed rappers turned horrible poets, and the best of the others that actually attempt to rap are around the level of the worst people on here

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:19 pm

lol ps3 line was funny....it was pretty good..havent seen u drop ne thing to do wit a battle in like 2006 years dawg...where u been?!...lol...dats gay da dude didnt go thru wit it...itd be one thing if he really rapped..but...love poem battles?...oh ill break ur heart wen i cheat on u!...LOL!!..dats all i can think of it being

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 2:12 pm

yea and the gayest part is that he was being a dick about it but didn't have the balls to do n e thing, i think tom said he bit off of a poem too (no surprise there)

overall it was ok.. i expected a lil more atleast but it wasn't bad

8th · Post by **8th** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:01 pm

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:34 pm

8th wrote:link

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:52 pm

i think this is the first or your shit ive ever seen/read, it was tight i liked the rhyme scheme and structure, made it easy to read and follow, flow was nice.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 12:26 am

good looking out all that gave some feedback

and yeah ghost, this is probably the first thing i've posted since you been on the site

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 1:02 am

Yah. It was a nice battle verse especially for doing it in about 5-10 minutes. Basically I told him about it and he was done. Ill shit.

critan · Post by **critan** » Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:42 pm

preety good post, i like i how it wasnt all based on rhyming and was more based on substance, very respectable post

Invincible · Post by **Invincible** » Sun Dec 17, 2006 12:16 am

haha funny verse..."let's just make it a topical battle"

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