Business

[ugly]

[font=comic sans MS]Look Im playful, all KO's enimies wear the halo
Im the devils angle despencing these MC's w/anal
rotting the mic w/cavitys n elevatin it w/gravity
fuck a yearly salary I gradually rob'em actually
heres the onslaught, the potent weed has drawn thoughts
here i faught-off betrayers so I shoot till applaud stops
repping from iLLest.. leave battles bruised purple like grimis
in each minute I rip-it da quickest n finish eatin these women
metaphorically u step short of me ur neck is a course 4 me
My knuckles will look like they just play'd quaters b
you'd say I molested this piece but i aint a minister
ask lil kids "no ones sicker sir" way to sinister peep the signature
you need advisement dis is to graphic, da ground risies my status
cant be touch'd like the cactus, faggots tails between fear da baddest [/font]

[ugly]

uppin feed

[GrimBlaze]

heres the onslaught, the potent weed has drawn thoughts
here i faught-off betrayers so I shoot till applaud stops


liked the flow in this line.
think you could still elevate lyrically bro, but overall not bad.

[ScottJames]

this was aiight... nothing too too great.. u needa hit up spell check, cuz u mis spelled a few words:


enimies
angle
despencing


its all good though..
decent read.

[ugly]

good lookin on feed

uppin

[TheBigHurt~]

i like the flow, keep it up cuz.
it's short though