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Omega Bill
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I've seen writers come and go, battlers who cant flow
Lyricists who write shit and think they're good to go
Seen the bad talk about me because I rarely battle
But there was barely any when I was in the saddle
I'm already established, I've proven I can take a W
I've proven I can take a L like a man, unlike some of you
It's not about who's better, it's about who has luck
Because the battles I seen now simply fucking suck
Where's the heart and the passion of Rell vs Kurse?
Where's the kids gettin bodied and ridin in a hearse?
On Illest now-a-days you can win without a blow-up
You can win without writing, half u dont even show up
The writtens are pathetic and the cyphers are dimmed
16 Micz is still a pussy, and Subsist still cant win
Arvincible used to battle till he got a job at the Panda Inn
The more things change the more they stay the same
But the battles were better having the title with my name
This is an open invitation to the nation led by no light
I'll slice you're fuckin throat n leave lacerations on ur windpipe
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Post by ugly »

this was solid mane, i liked the concept but if I was too down people I would come hard cuz its like all they're gonna say is "this was trash, who u think you are with these average bars dissin us?" ya know, but thats me

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I'm already established, I've proven I can take a W
I've proven I can take a L like a man, unlike some of you

16 Micz is still a pussy, and Subsist still cant win
Arvincible used to battle till he got a job at the Panda Inn

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Post by Omega Bill »

Haha, thanks for the feed, dude. I've already shit on Subshit and 16 Dykz though.

First thing I've written in a minute so I'm tryna shake the rust off.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Pretty Koo, i Think U Coulda Dug a Bit Deeper Wit Tha Statements ..
U Coulda Hit Wit Harder Punches ..
But it Was a Koo Read all & all ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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RELL FiaSCO

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Post by Haz »

16 Micz is still a pussy, and Subsist still cant win
Arvincible used to battle till he got a job at the Panda Inn
The more things change the more they stay the same
But the battles were better having the title with my name
This is an open invitation to the nation led by no light
I'll slice you're fuckin throat n leave lacerations on ur windpipe

Aggressive End..
Shit Was Funny...
Seemed Like a Vent Verse About The Site To Me..

Anyways That Was The Stand Out Part...
Next Time Make The Piece Longer..
Good Shit..
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