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I love it when I meet a new bitch - I get excited/
ready to get inside it - wanna see the way she ride it/
this girl I met 10 days ago she beggin for the hammerhead/
hit her standin up against the wall and on her grandma's bed/
at first she was real shy - but a straight up fly bitch/
met her at a club - walked up to it stood beside it/
a minute later - had her bent over grindin the dick/
mindin the dick, pardon me miss get behind here real quick/
she was horny as hell - as we exchanged our info/
my future nympho wants it now, we went into her pinto/
damn she was bangin - curves like that Halle Berry/
face like that Angelina - lips red like candy cherries/
she sees my member - lets out a "wow" and "damn"/
as i proceed with the oral exam/
at first she sucks the head - cups it in her mouth just right/
damn baby - I wanna feel like this every night/
next thing I know I'm just fuckin' her in the mouth/
then I beat up that pussy - and I pulled the fuck out/
we banged for like an hour more - damn she's a whore/
I love it tho, baby got mad skills and much more/
banged her a couple of times - at her grandma house/
bust in her face, her eye - even on her grandma's couch/
she sucked it all day - I fucked that all night/
hot sweaty sex - straight make a nigga feel right/
she callin every day now but I met some other fly chick/
because it takes more than one to satisfy my fly dick......hoe. Hahaha...



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Post by eMCee Havic »

hahaha yeah that was some good dirty shit,

after i read this a big L line popped in my head for some rease
"We could never be a couple hun
-fuck love, all i got for hoes is hard dick in bubble gum."

i dont know i just had to put that there..
but my favorite line off this piece was

"damn she was bangin - curves like that Halle Berry/
face like that Angelina - lips red like candy cherries/ "

that shit just flowed perfect, it was just good

7/10 nuff said

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Post by Quix »

damn she was bangin - curves like that Halle Berry/
face like that Angelina - lips red like candy cherries

fELT THAT ^


shit came off Grymey!!!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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lol this was funny fam, i liked the flow had some killer ideas too
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Post by Kurse »

That shit was solid kid...had me rollin. Real smooth, durty-birdness...I was feelin it. It was structured clean and flowed nicely the way it was written. It would make for a decent audio.
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Post by Darth Vader »

upzz....

thanks for all the f/b y'all, wish I could do some audio but a nigga just gotta pen, paper, and the internet...so if y'all have any suggestions as to where I can get started as far as putting these words to music, it would help me out no doubt.

i ain't done but 2 maybe 3 audio tracks with a couple of my manz back in the day, but homie doin' time so a nigga kinda lost his way until I came up on this site. so any info / help would be much appreciated...1
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