my freestyle about nothing really at all

[mountaindrew]

this is my shit, my place, everything i make....
its the air i breath..the wind blowing in the trees.out there in the open, so easyler broken..
but they dont care, cause there just there, chilling all day making us some air
trees are life...and yet we still take theres with big knifes
no thought about it...just big weapons and toys that make alot of noise...
no effort about it...
there, one second gone the next..those who dont live life will regret
but will never forget all the times stolen left behind in the streeet life

if you do it right
ull get out alive

life is short, dont ever forget it
because in this life ull live to regret it
there one minute gone the next..this is what lifes about and its shit
but its life and you cant change that no matter wat
this is ur spot.
spot light and all eyes are on you..everyone in the city of melton
will have there eyes on you, when you spit the rymes like you do

you'll be the hottest thing in melton yeah thats right you
you, not me but imhappy to just be free, to say wat i want and do wat i do
thats the way i roll and
thats why i respect you
my brother, my friend, someone who i can depend on....
in a time of need, yes indeed,
your the one,
one of the only brothers i can depend on

peace brother thats my shit if you didnt like it
i guess you can go suk my dick
because i dont care wat anyone thinks
im the whitest bitch ulll ever meet, skinny thing no muscle just meat
but im kool wit dat, i know wat im about
white kid from south
tell me about it


and that all i got
tc mayne look at the clock.why i was writing and freestyling the clock didnt stop
its late..time for bed tc bruv yeah, i know.. i already said it but ill say it again
tc bruvs and goodnight everyone

[eMCee Havic]

i didnt really like this at all, no quotables nothing jumpin off the screen at me.. over all 3/10

try gettin your flow and technique more locked down.

other than that keep droppin and your bond to progress

[Darth Vader]

seems like you're all over the place with this...i know ur just freestying or whatever but its kinda like just trying to make it fit rather than a developed type of flow...keep at it tho, try to improve by even thinking it out a bit more before putting it on paper/screen.