i'm new, I want to get into a good first battle

[superior]

anybody looking for a battle 20 bars

[Dghost]

I get under yo skin like MOSQUITO BITES//
I bomb faster then TORPEDO STRIKES with NEEDLE SPIKES//
FLEE FOR YOUR LIFE, when you SEE ME IN THE NIGHT cuz I feel the NEED TO FIGHT//
GHOST HAS ARRIVED, to POST A REPLY that will make the COSMOS COLLIDE//
While you only speak with FALSE QUOTES AND LIES//
Im everlasting like FOSSILS IN TIME//
I direct you like TAR ROADS AND SIGNS//
My HARD CORE RHYMES many wanna BORROW OR BUY//
So I freestyle in BAR CODED LINES//
Ill change your NAME TO INFERIOR//
Based on your BRAINS INTERIOR//
Have you lost in space as if you was CHASING A METEOR//
Only reason people MAY BE IN FEAR OF YA is cuz your an AIDS CARRIER//
So what you on STAGE FOR? To WAGE WAR?//
Fuck 20 bars I can go a PAGE MORE// (15)
Beg for mercy, cuz IM your ONLY SAVIOR//
Ill smoke you like the shit in between the ROLLING PAPERS//
Cut yo THROAT WITH RAZORS and THROW YOU TO THE GATORS//
Im colder then POLAR ACRES, hotter then SOLAR QUASARS//
My fist are MOLAR BREAKERS, that will crack the WHOLE EQUATOR//

20 bars I set it off so show me what you got and dont no one steal my shit! Look forward to any one wanting to try me.

[superior]

yo, can one of us post the battle or do we need an admin to do it., i'm gonna go eat now, i'll drop my 20 later today

[Haz]

Just drop Yours In Here And i'll Put It Into a Thread For You Guys.

[Dghost]

Just wanna know who will judge the battles, I wanna get a track record goin. Newbie better eat, get your energy up, cuz youll need it. Hope your 20s hot, I do nothing but rhyme whether on beats, paper, acappella--whatever. This is my passion so if you come with some clown ass shit you will be called out on it.

[superior]

like ammut i devour men's souls, cower all you want i still swallow them whole.
Hell is in my belly so spit them flames, your innards soft as jelly, you bout to git them drained
in a truly gruesome manor, i'll make them doubt I'm sane. you got the attitude but what about that name?
A ghost? this must be a joke, a comedy roast, i laughed so hard i nearly choked
it seems you really believe, that a man who is dead can defeat the supreme
you can't even meet me, your trapped in the after life, you like being dead more than being alive
being a phantom makes you just a fresh ride, nothing but metal that i toss aside
anybody could rhyme or write lyrics in time, you just write what sounds nice, yours ain't nothing like mine
your in such a rush to bust some bars, you forgot just who you are.
you think your hot, lets hear it son!, I'll wipe you out like megatherium.
make you extinct before you can think, and wash you away like germs in my sink
Those bars were just your second post, you're nothing but a bug you roach.
and as my words reverberate, my lyrics will exterminate, before you even germinate
your lyrics just exasperate, and agitate, they're sweet so i just masticate
your rhymes. wipe you up like slime, spend your dimes, and punish your crimes
bend your lines, and smooth out your grind, I'm bout to wrap this up like twine
four bars left so for now i guess i'll take some time to shred your flesh
D ghost has been decimated, no traces left so they just estimate his time of death
his first battle was his last death rattle, did you hear it, cuz now he really is a spirit
your soft as custard, your lack luster, WHO WANNA CALL THE GHOST BUSTER

[superior]

the standard bunch is cool wit me

[Dghost]

Whos this ILLITERATE, IDIOT, tryna get CONCEPTUAL//
You just TRANS-SEXUAL who loves it when MEN WRESTLE YOU//
Your IGNORANCE is EMMINENT, and your TEXT IS PROOF//
Im ANY MINUTE RICH, and your PENNYLESS when the CHECKS RUN THROUGH//
You suck VEGTABLES, and think TESTICLES are EDIBLE//
You dont need EXTRA LUBE to make your RECTEM HOLE ACCESSIBLE//
Its already STRETCHABLE to an extent that its EXCESSIBLE//
Not only do I bust rhymes but also a TECK OR TWO//
Your wack as fuck... its QUITE CLEAR and NO WONDER//
This HOMO-MUTHAFUCKER probably has NIGHTMARES after watching GHOST BUSTERS//
You needa TAMPON just cause your RESEMBLANCE is FENIMINE//
EVER SINCE I LOGGED ON, I CAN SENSE your ESTROGAN//
My raps make ya OD like EXCESSIVE MEDICINE//
Yo ass is SO WEAK in fight no one EXPECTS NO ADRENALINE//
Your raps SUCK BEST so dont ACCEPT NO SUCCESS cuz youll NEVER WIN// (15)
Even as a SPECTRE Ill be your SUCCESSOR//
I take PLEASURE in raising BLOOD PRESSURES- way ABOVE MEASURES//
One fatal CUT to DISECT YA, so I can lay your GUTS over FIVE SECTORS//
You never had a chance like a miscarrage aborted in the first TRIMESTER//
With me here ILLEST LYRICS will thread this battle like NINE SWEATERS with FINE TEXTURES//

I dont believe I hafta to type nothing else...

[superior]

time out beetlejuice. you really wanna come at me all angry and shit?

listen to this ghost boast, as if his skill could ever approach, mine
little niga i slow time when i rhyme, cuz my lines slay like light rays
through night, they, pierce the dark like steaks in the hearts
of the undead,your verse was so foul i wish it could be un-read
I'm hot like the sun, son, you suck like Dracula
stand in my shine your dust, that i'll vacuum up. i'm a dust devil
Trust that i'm on an upper level, while your still on stage one
when it comes to rage, ghost one. when it come on stage, ghost done
Your as ill as halitosis, I'm spittin terboculosis, in lethal doses that leave you comatose kid.
Know that ghost did, come back from the dead, cuz i killed in round one
like a shot to his head, like a blade to his heart, like a bar against his throat
as he weases and chokes. so someone perform a himelick before i get
a fine for killing him without 20 ines. you had a couple funny rhymes
but I'm, tired of wasting my vision on your raps, that collapse like fission
perhaps in, oh twenty years or so, we could go toe to toe, but whoah
slow your roll, you ever being better than me, is myth. like ogres and trolls
order, control, both things that you lack. senseless defenceless, is how you attack
you can come back ten-thousand times, you'll still be stagnant as puddle brine
you aren't dissin' wit me i flow like the mississippi, while you drown in DE-NILE
meanwhile, I'm just idle waiting for you to grow up, hope i don' go senile.

chill man.

[Dghost]

I replied back but my pc froze and I lost the whole script so Ill start from scratch

My MEATPHORS are MEANT FOR WAR//
Resulting in BLOOD AND GORE, I got you striking out more then lightning in a THUNDERSTORM//
You couldnt hit shit if you PUNCHED A TURD//
SON Im BIBLICAL, your da ONE thats MYTHACAL//
PLUS your a CLOWN thats PITIFUL, I can drown you in a KIDDIE POOL//
My FIST ALONE will SPLIT your BRITTLE BONES, leave you with a WITHERED SOUL and your CONDITION CRITICAL//
Fuck halitosis Im so SICK ITS CLINICAL, more VISERAL then threats that KILLERS POSE//
Ill headbutt a boulder into pebbles and sharp LITTLE STONES, SWALLOW THEM WHOLE then SPIT A POEM that will RIP A HOLE in your VENTRICALS//
SWITCH THE FLOW that will GRIP YOUR THROAT like one of Dr. OCTOPUS's TENTICALS//
Watch as the TENSION GROWS as I become three DIMENSIONAL and END THE SHOW once I FINISH YOU//
Your RHYMES are UNCONVENTIONAL, only pertaining to what you PRETEND TO KNOW//
MINE are COMMENDIBLE, weopens that will DEFEND MY THRONE and SEND YOU HOME DEAD WITH NO GENTIALS//
Your downfall is UNPREVENTABLE, as if you were shot up from HEAD TO TOE, seeking ATTENTION from MEDICAL//
Your birth was UNINTENTIONAL, like the governmnet INVENTING DOPE, and it wasnt being used for what it was INTENDED FOR// (15)
My DEFENSE IS INPENETRABLE, but Ill BEND A POLE comprised of METAL CHROME and make it FLEXIBLE, then dissolve it like METADOME//
Illest will have to CENSOR POSTs of ENTRIES I WROTE, cuz I'll write shit so DESPICABLE it will OFFEND US BOTH//
My styles are IMPECCABLE, yours are carbon copys from which mine were PERFECTED FROM//
TRADEMARKS of a PROFFESSIONAL, using GRAVEYARDS as STEPPING STONEs to INFEST THE GLOBE, polluting airwaves to INFECT THE OZONE//
Your final breath will make your CHEST EXPLODE like a bomb with a METRONOME, killing every one around you, so you can now face your DEATH ALONE//
Judges hit us up with some feed back, appreciate it. Peace

[Dghost]

Im here till friday so get at me man and keep it rollin, any one gonna judge or what?

[superior]

I'll make one and we gotta repost our verses there