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New world order II

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[font=Microsoft Sans Serif][intro]
I seriously belive theres a new world order
and cuz of the media, the world dosent see it
Knowing I cannot be helped scares me

[personal thoughts]
In school tryin to learn pathagory, then Im slapped by reality
Teacher turns on the news, its 9/11 we're hit by catastrophe
The president states that America is populated by blasphomy
But I knew he did'nt care, its their world n we're the calorie
with dreams comes the prophecy, in mine I see only monotony
an odyssey of poverty has gottin me stuck in lower quality
nothing positive, only a minus. Blood diamons, riot sirens
ache from sinus, crisis from zionists. I only conjure defiance
I try to perceive the science but I'm struckin by arthritis
Im like a squirl, trying to bural beneath this world
I curle in a ball and hide but im hurl'd and given a referal
theres no justice just a substance of an abudant of Fuck It!
But the cry from my baby cousin has me fighting till the age of a-hundred

[Im a stan, poem]
By nature I question, my thoughts and my intentions
what is this universe, this galaxy
we survive cuz of a star that provides heat
a coensidence? or is it immanent?
these thoughts arnt reveries, there my minds felonys
I Know the present, and see the future but what was?
where am I from, before existance

[last bar]
I think myself to be ugly, like Im nothing but a message
being starved anorexic. Knowing Im dying as an adolescent[/font]
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Post by talentone »

what the fuck are you talking about? HAHAHAHAHAHA
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Post by ugly »

educate yourself, this are polictical and true thoughts. Not for the average pre-teen still going threw puberty.
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Post by talentone »

HAHAHAHA... none of that shit was political... you were just saying shit you thought people will want to hear. None of it required thought or insight. I think you need to go and study more "pathagory" HAHAHAHAHA
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Post by ugly »

pathagory is to due with math n different theorys, school stuff. Damn ur dumb. Go to neopets.com or nickolodian.com or sumthin, dis is above u in every aspect
this is personal thoughts, as i stated on my verse, period.


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Post by talentone »

HAHAHAHAHHA ok genius. have fun with your "pathagory" HAHAHAHAHA
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Post by repteelay »

not so bad, real talk
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Post by ugly »

does this fuck even know wat the "New world order" Is??? Or are u still under the impression obamas ur hero. How old r u?? have ur balls dropped?? like wat the fuck is u about litto kid, damn shut up
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Post by GrimBlaze »

not a bad drop but its a lil abstract in places so some people might not understand what you gettin at but like you said its your personal thoughts so cant really fuck with that.
keep droppin and keep elevating
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Post by ugly »

yep, exactly how i saw this piece when i was written it. I thought "this may be confusing to readers but its more personal" and i thought some readers could find some similairitys with me.
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the vocab was full
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So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by talentone »

struckin by arthritis HAHAHAHAH
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Post by ugly »

talentone wrote:struckin by arthritis HAHAHAHAH
can u even rap?? drop a verse, write a bar, do sumthin! somone delete this fuckers account already damn

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Post by talentone »

STRUCKIN BY ARTHRITIS! HAHAHAHAHAHHA you got inflimation of the joints? HAHAHAHAHAHAH you fuking senior citizen
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Post by talentone »

and take that eminem shit outta your avy. YOU AINT HIM. HAHAHAHA you queer ass nigga.
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