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[ugly]

damn dude fix ur structure, nuff said

[ugly]

Thats better, but also when you work on structure your Bars have to be at an even length

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^^^^^ good structure for easy reading and even length in your bars aka ur Lines. I left u some feed on the other thread so check it out

[Quix]

wasn't feeling it!!!

[ugly]

dude, wat do u want? a perfect score?? I think dis might be better on audio, cuz wen u write text it should be perfected rythming, multis, ect. Cuz we dont kno how you would use ur word play un-like if u did this on an audio.

[Haze]

Would like to here you spit it man