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Im guessing this was a freestyle?? or quick-write, right? But it stood solid towards the end with some personal shyt, i feel it

flow: 4/10
multis: 0/10
delivery: 2/10
imagery: 5/10
structure: 1/10
originality: 2/10


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A nigga gotta eat n feed before we starve/
Through my words, my music, my art/
clearly heard, that i been true to it from the start/
Like Brooklyn, we go hard/
its all love, lata ill see yall!
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