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Problemz - Part Of Tha Game

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[font=Times New Roman]PROBLEMZ.....

Name of this joint iz self explanitory yall.... appreciate ya feed homies.
holla at ya boy
~1Hundred
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Post by HKX »

feelin dis shit much props dis is 4 every emcee and if an emcee can't feel dis track than i dunno wtf they thinkin or doin or livin good shit dawg made props on da track dawg only prob i had is ur vocals dawg who ever mixes ur shit have em carefully mix it up its nice but its da vocals r off a lil jus a lil homie not dat much
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Post by Cuttin P »

i like the build up into the first verse! ya verses are soundin a lil over written cause ya bars are ending slightly off beat then other points right on beat. But the lyrics are on point! I can relate to what ya saying here. The song itself pretty good. the beat is a kinda being owned by ya vocals. Good Work homie!

I'm glad ya muthafuckaz here making some good music!!!
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Best audio i heard so far my dude. nice flow and was seriously feeling the build up on the intro. nicely put together track. Props
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Post by Problemz »

i appreciate tha feed yell... n i b mixin my own joints....

uppin...

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Post by TreTru »

this concept was good i was feelin it..

the beat..was dope..i like it alot...the piano riff is tight

the hook was pretty good too..

the verses had good meaning lyrically good..i agree wid x on da
mixxing..but if ya doing it U'rself..all you gotta do is keep tweakin
it til you get it right

all in all though this shyt was def a good ass drop....1
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Post by Petrafyne »

This Is Dope, Very Lyrical, Timing Is On...I Just Think Your Rhythm is Similar To A lot Of People.
With More Time Spent On Every Track And Some Better Production You Will Gain More Experience...Your Sayin Things A Certain Way But The Emotion Is Not There.



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Post by Problemz »

this was actually a throw back, i wrote n recored this on a diff beat a cpl yrz ago, i aint even got tha beat ne more n my old production wasnt good (had a shitty mic) haha... i decided ta rercord this ta a diferent beat, good lookion for tha feed homie, im always tryin ta betta mysef...
uppin..
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