Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

ABC's

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
ugly
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 124
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:28 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

ABC's

Post by ugly »

A
Assemble Assassins, Amplify Artilary, Angle And Alter Armys
Ascend Axes At Asses Attackin Ankles and Aratecate Artorys *ouch*
After Acid Attracted Aggressive Anger Aboard Awaits An Arbiter
Im Absent Actin, high As Aladin, use Arsonal And Acetate his Armor
Attach Antlers At All Areas Around And Ammunate Arms
A-holes Get Anal After I Ate-those And Aputate Arms....Amen

B
Broken, Beatin By Bashes, Brothers Burried Beneath Baskits
Below Belongs Battered Burned Bodys, But me the Baddest
Baffling, Battling, Battering But I Brightin like Baterys
Because Bruising Bitches is'nt the Biggest Business Basterd-please



damn im tired guys sorry couldnt finish......L8rz
User avatar
ugly
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 124
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:28 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by ugly »

damn im gettin no luv on dis..
User avatar
Cuttin P
Rhyme Master
Offline
Posts: 176
Joined: Mon Mar 09, 2009 12:54 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0
Location: College Park, Atlanta, Ga
Contact:

Post by Cuttin P »

Homie u got give feedback to another post and show a link before u can get feedback. Do this and I got cha on the feed.
(Artist Page) http://www.myspace.com/cuttinp
(soundclick) http://www.soundclick.com/cuttinp

Image
Image

Cuttin P
Foreva
User avatar
ugly
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 124
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:28 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by ugly »

no deal
User avatar
Haze
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 14
Joined: Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:54 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 1

Post by Haze »

Nice man showing some real skill here
User avatar
The Gonz
Flow Creation
Flow Creation
Offline
Posts: 1113
Joined: Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:33 pm
Wins: 1
Losses: 2000
Location: A position higher than you

Post by The Gonz »

Too short. If yer gonna call the piece ABC's, at least have the C in there. Topic has been done numerous times, I never like these pieces to begin with because its usually nothing more than babbling and incoherent phrases that tell no story or have any real meaning. Props for trying, but I think peeps would have a hard time trying to top Blackalicious' rendition.
User avatar
ugly
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 124
Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:28 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by ugly »

TheRuckus wrote:Too short. If yer gonna call the piece ABC's, at least have the C in there. Topic has been done numerous times, I never like these pieces to begin with because its usually nothing more than babbling and incoherent phrases that tell no story or have any real meaning. Props for trying, but I think peeps would have a hard time trying to top Blackalicious' rendition.
yea bro I was so tired so i had to go to sleep, Ima get at this soon fasho, but iwasnt tryin out due nobody, just showing im capable of wordplay, and just holdin it down in text. Wasnt the best but I'll put sumthin good out soon, good lookin on feed
User avatar
repteelay
Novice
Offline
Posts: 54
Joined: Thu Mar 19, 2009 4:15 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 2
No Shows: 1

Post by repteelay »

yeah, good start
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests