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New Beat 2/3/2009

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I Haven't Made Any Beat's In A Lil Over Two Months, So I Made This Just To Get Back Into The Swing Of Things.
It's Not Done Yet....A Couple More Sound's Here And There Maybe....Somthin To Make It Less Repetitive.



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<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
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<param name="quality" value="high">
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Post by Lotus »

hmm... id say drop the beat sometime around 3:00 for a few bars, jus that bell soundin thing and the main synth wit some bass

dunno jus an idea
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Good Idea But I Think That's A Lil Too Late....Unless I Drop It Out Like That Just Onetime, Maybe I'll See How That Works Anyway, But I'm Thinkin Bout 2:30....
I Still Haven't Got Back To Workin On That Beat Yet But I'll Update.
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yo check out my new beat for a minute lemme no wat u think.

http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 9b50085d0/
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i don't like the kick sounds like something from a rock kit actually sounds more like a timpani than a kick just doesn't fit right with the vibe at all and it needs a bassline, other than that its straight
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Wut You Listen 2 This On Some 20 Dollar Headphones....
Yeah This Maybe My Style More Than Yours So I'ma Run With It, I'm Almost Done With The Final Version, Doubt I'm Goin Post That....If I Was Tre I Wouldn't Have Sent A Template Of Any Beat To Nobody....You Know Better Than That, You Never Know Who You Can Trust These Days.
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hahaha..yeah well you know..that shyt's been sittin now for almost a year..
so since it didn't pan out as good as we thought it could be ..fuck it
i wanna see if he can make it better...if so that's one more banger..
to add to the pile..and a possible colab orig..
besides you know these is just the leftovers...hahaha 8)

and you shouldn't talk your ass got all ya damn beats on
soundclick like..heeeyyy come take me away and put me on your mixxtape..
hahaha..
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and dont let Petrafyne fool you..this kidds got waaaaayyyyy hotter beats
then any of this shyt he's been droppin and so do I.. but we aint puttin them
up already cuz what happened with mutual
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Post by drunken jesus »

Petrafyne wrote:Wut You Listen 2 This On Some 20 Dollar Headphones....
Yeah This Maybe My Style More Than Yours So I'ma Run With It, I'm Almost Done With The Final Version, Doubt I'm Goin Post That....If I Was Tre I Wouldn't Have Sent A Template Of Any Beat To Nobody....You Know Better Than That, You Never Know Who You Can Trust These Days.
lol why you salty nigga? 1. tre sent me that shit to add a diff drumline to it if i was going to jack it what good would the reason file be if a nigga gonna jack something he gonna jack a mp3 which anybody could've got 2. i'm a producer too why would i jack anybody when i could get jacked just as easily i probably have over 300 jawns online

i just dropped advice like i do in most threads in this section i didn't come at you sideways
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Don't Take It Personal Shit, That's Just How I Do.

And Yeah Tre I Hope The Right Person Jacks My Shit, But I Aint Even Trippin On That It Was Just My Opinion, Im Down For Networking.....After You Dig Your Panty Bunches Out Your Asses Make Sure You Wash Your Hands...Damn

Put A Smiley Face On That
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Petrafyne wrote:Don't Take It Personal Shit, That's Just How I Do.

And Yeah Tre I Hope The Right Person Jacks My Shit, But I Aint Even Trippin On That It Was Just My Opinion, Im Down For Networking.....After You Dig Your Panty Bunches Out Your Asses Make Sure You Wash Your Hands...Damn

Put A Smiley Face On That

ayy beeeooootttccchhh ..they're speedo's and they got fukn sponge bob ^^^^
on them dude..panties aint got sponge bob..mofo../and speedos are made to be ridin high...hahaha.. stop peepin me out..
hahaha.. 8)
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Dude I Was Just Fuckin Playin...That Was Too Much Info
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Post by Cuttin P »

i hear the sub bass shit in it... it ain't bad though... just a few more change ups here and there and itll be good. Only thing i'd suggest is mixing the sounds to make the beat bigger. try to see how it sounds with a different kick drum and clap sound... keep the sub bass in that shit though. the drum pattern itself is kinda funky
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