jus bord...droppin sumtin new

[SubstanZ]

[align=center]I'm sitting, spitting, blitted in my fitted with a baseball bat,
I erase all cats with punches that even have spaceballs laugh,
Crack cats coofys in half like that age old man shaft,
So I put everyone in the game but maino up on blast,
Smash up and crash your mainframe, then shatter and break shit like glass,
My hearts ice cold steel, because from the present to the past, my brains seem to remain die cast,
And when you fags is singing in mass will be the only time your rhymes might last the lyrical crash,
I must've put lead in my lungs like some hash, because everytime i spit some hollow tip slugs blast,
Im on some nuclear shit breakin homes and bones, so if rappers in casts then I put 'em in caskets,
Seriously I straight murder these spineless bastards,
Bars some uncut raw dope, (YES), some sealed and stamped shit, talib quality cant pass this,
Every motherfucker knows substance stay on name brands kid,
So now I'm sipping on some brandy, and miss brandy be lovin when I hits it so she jones for me A K A her mans b,
And I been starting to advance so I'm advancing to plan b, at last you be ghost and get to be known as ghastly,
The second phase's here and either on the stage or in the studio im fucking nasty,
Substance done passed G, so fuck gold records 'cause when I bust this it gets obvious you spit mad weak,
Yeah son forever your shit admits itself as bullshit illegitamite spit its last week,

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[Cuttin P]

Cuzzo, im not sure if you did so or not but u must post a link of another written you've previous gave feedback on. And post tha link on your drops.

[Webbz]

Yo it starts off straight, I like the flow of it and the multies, but after a few bars the flow changes and it starts to run together, altogether its good though. Good work keep it up, 1.