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beats called will i shine? moody type beats..i just create a melody and loop certain parts..i'm used to putting alot into the beat lyrically and
stuff so i like'm with less noise..we spit down on this like a year ago
and never used it cuz it didnt sound right..anyway..




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<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
<param name="menu" value="false">
<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=7404565&scid=7404565&q=hi&ext=1">
<param name="scale" value="noscale">
<param name="salign" value="b">
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000">
</object>


honest feed is fine i aint gon cry...hahaha..
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shyt i loved this
dope dark melody catchy aswell
i could spit sumin fresh to this
can't be arsed right now though
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by drunken jesus »

melodys are ill but it needs a drumline and a bassline

if you still have the original project files or have it tracked out hit me up with it and i'll add a drumline and bassline
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yeah i do it's on reason 3.0.i got the wave file too..
wich one you want?
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Post by Kurse »

Not bad. But I agree with Jesus. It's lacking the "BANG" that it needs.

When u rock shit like this...it needs to wang in the trunk!!

But not bad...i could get off on sum shit like this. Do yo thang Tre!
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the reason file, i think it'll work if you only used the included sounds, i'll save it tracked out and import it into FL to do the drums and bassline cause i'm not a big fan of reason
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
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You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by TreTru »

shyt.. well i used a buncha extra refills..a dre kit refill and
a buncha stuff so alot of the sounds might come up..missin..
i'll just send ya both..should i send it to ya e-mail or can
i download the template here?
so let me know or give me the email and ill send both versions
with the BPM's and shyt..so DJ you wanna rock this joint too?..
it'd be ME, YOU and P-FYNE ..if we did..any subject or we could
go with the will I shine concept..let me know



ohh yeah..and..

that's the problem whith my beats..i get to a point that
i just aint sure what else to add to it..and that's usually
a turnin point like..it's dope until that point but all it
takes is one assy sound then BAM..it sucks hahaha..so i just
dont add anything else and sit on it for like a month or 2 hahaha.
i got a gang more just alot of shyt on my plate..
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Post by Lotus »

Damn this is a hot joint. it's different, but its got a real powerful feel to it. it needs some kicks and a good drum pattern wit that bass pumpin. diggin that electric guitar riff... howd u do that? sampling, or did u jus do it in the program u used
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email it tracked out to [email protected]
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
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You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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yeah lotus i just played it out midi style..as like a 48 bar or sumthin then
kept two seperate 16's , i'm good with the string sounds cuz i learned some
classical style piano when i was way young..but uhh i used 2 or 3 different guitars..and my kick drums are reversed..so i think i ended up turning them down alot cuz they were too loud at first..instuments..
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Man this would be hard as fuck with a drum beat! the potential here is crazy!
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ayy thanks alot P..

and Jesus check ya email..i sent it to you..get@me when you done..
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SO jESUS YOU DONE WITH THIS JOINT HOMEY?...

let me know when...
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actually totally forgot about it till now, i'll get to it in the next few days
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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haha..aight then let's do it...thanx man..get@me..
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