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Problemz-Holla At A Playa(Feat. Devious) [UPDATED, MP3 NOW]

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Problemz-Holla At A Playa(Feat. Devious) [UPDATED, MP3 NOW]

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[font=Arial Black]Problemz - 1st Verse, 3rd Verse, & Hook
Devious - 2nd Verse [/font]
Recorded 2 weeks ago.

[font=Times New Roman]Im always lookin ta improve my ishhh n betta myself. So lemme kno wats good. N good lookin to all those who drop thay 2cents.
Holla Bakk at ya boy!!!!

~1Hundred
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oh yeah... can som1 lemme kno how ta put tha soundclick player on this joint for my posted trax???!!! good looks...

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ay yo im at work right now so i cant hear this ..but i'll feed this
when i get home..

and to put the soundclick player on just..
go to soundclick then go to band admin..same way you
got your high fi link..but instead of clickin
link click embed then embed single song..then it
should let you chose and everything...hop that helps you out...

ohh yeah and juss so your keen on things..check out the rules for
audio chamber drops..,..aight 1
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ohh iight im not a vip on soundclick so its not letin me do it... is tha link i got str8? or is there anotha thing i can use???
oh n my bad 4 not readin rulez 1st... neva been good wit em haha, but i deleted my otha threadz homie...
1 a week, i gotcha....
holla bakk
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what it is playuh?...hahaha..you didnt have to delete'em..
if they was as hott as this one..you might wanna drop'em eventually

anyway..beat's sik

first verse- tight ass flow ..deliv's pretty good. presence is
solid..nice

hook-was good too..lotsa action in it..some bumpin shyt

second verse- wa aight..some good lyc's too IMO good shyt

third verse-dope flow again, presence solid ,your lyc's are good in both verses
but sounded like you might've juggled it on the end..jus a lil..
not a big deal though IMO

dope ass drop..mayne..welcome to illest lyrics ..
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no doubt, appreciate tha luv n feel u bout endin of 3. i think i also used som kinda effect i dont like wen i said our namez at tha beginin too. but honestly, this was tha 1st joint i recorded in bout 2yrs or som shit n i didnt even remember my producin wayz wit cool edit ne more, haha... took me messin wit the joint i did afta this a few times, n im pretty sure i got it bak down now (but ill let yall peep n b tha judges of that) wen i did this i was aimin for more a "comercial" feel, n yeah my otha shit i guess is iight so i been told too. ima post 1 more lata or 2marrow or som shit, im constantly writin fire wen im not makin that green. good looks for ya feed tho homie, n keep doin u playa
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Post by Kurse »

Dope track bruh.
Great choice of beat...you definately have a solid flow. I'm definately glad to see more serious emcee's with real talent joining onto illest. It's atartd with like 2 or 3 decent audio artists...and leaped to like a dozen or more in a matter of 2 months.
I get a kick out of your swagger mayne...you have your own lil sound goin on over there. Ur boy ain't bad either...but in my opinion, your flow is a bit more precise than his is.
Pretty good concept.
I'ma say 8.5/10
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Kurse wrote:Dope track bruh.
Great choice of beat...you definately have a solid flow. I'm definately glad to see more serious emcee's with real talent joining onto illest.
I get a kick out of your swagger mayne...you have your own lil sound goin on over there.
Pretty good concept.
I'ma say 8.5/10
Appreciate ya 411, n im glad ya feelin my style homie. Ima stay active up on illest, deff likin tha site.
thnx 4 tha luv
~1Hundred
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