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This is my 1st single off mixtape "Nightmare Recreation"

http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 99a568fa5/
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Post by RAJE »

beat was hot, hook was hot.

i think you need to pronounce your words a little more, it was audible, but needs to be moreso.

all in all though i'd definately bump this. really enjoyed listenin to it
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this was nice
the beat was groovin
the flow had it goin on
the hook was str8
man nice job on this shyt keep em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Hookupman »

i appritiate the love people this a rough draft im gonna re-record it
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Post by precise »

tracks got potential, i think mixing was the only drawback here, good shit dude
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Hookupman »

precise wrote:tracks got potential, i think mixing was the only drawback here, good shit dude

yeah my lil brother learned new mixing shit imma re-do it though thanks playa
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