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Don't think i've ever posted an audio on here before

recorded this last week, would appreciate some feed
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Post by TreTru »

the beat was kinda crazy..at first on that one
synth ..but it's just loud or somthin...once
da beat kicks in fully it's aight..

the hook..was kinda off IMO..umm..i think theres a bakup
that's off or sumthin..the scheme and rythm is actually cool
though..

the verse...was good lyrically..decent..good scheme and rythm..
just a lil soft on the deliv and volume..in areas..sounds
like you know what ya doin with the flow though...

decent drop..short though...hahaha...anyway..keep droppin homey.
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Post by RAJE »

will add that the beat was by hassan ansari/abnotic records

i'm only responsible for the verse, but thanks for feed man,

uppin?
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Post by Lawgix »

ummmm this was okay... i think the beat was a lil loud on it... couldn't really hear the lyrics that well... but it was okay... couldn't really tell if u fell off or not... it was cool tho i won't rate it cause i didn't hear it that well... but i'll listen to it again n let ya know
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Post by RAJE »

thanks bro.

long time since i've heard from you!
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yeah no doubt...
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so yo anyone else?
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Post by TreTru »

looks like you been a member for a minute...that's cool..
you might wanna leave feed on other peoples songs too..if you really want more feed for your drop..fyi..peace
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Post by Dead Silence »

loved this beat
did a ight job with the flow
dont think alot of ppl would attempt this kinda thing

lyrics were iffy
u had some good ones
and some bad ones

try working with your lyrics a little bit.
and ur rhyme scheme.
i dk i just dont like it
but i liked how u "talked" to a female.

5/10

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