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Droppin A Duce hahahah

Post by talentone »

Im Dead? HHAHAHAHA imma drop duce like i was taking a shit son....

HAHAHAHAHAHAAH...just what i wanted...you rat lookin nigga.......
fuckin shitstain lookin nigga. fuck you...loook niGGA!!!!!

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA

T's malicious....u dont know me kid....

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKK....

T's Gully Son,I Spit-The-Boss-Things,U Look Like If LLoyd And Ghandi Had-an-Offspring//
Ones A Winner,Neva-Lost-Things,U Aint Black U Pakistani,Thats Why-Ur-Drops-Stink//
Looking Like A Half-Rat-Half-Man, Plus Dont He Look like Toocan-Sam-Got-A-Bad-tan?//
Bird Lookin Niggas Dont Act Like Bad Men,Cause Ill Eat This Fuckin Fruit Similar-To-Pac-Man//
Im Out Of This World Like-different-Species,My Style To U Aint Familiar Like-Youve-Neva-Seen-Me!//
Plus Youll Neva beat,Matta Fact,"Ask Spielberg".."Cause Thats The Only Time Youll-Get-To-Eat-T"!//
Kid-All-Ur-Shits-Fake,"Ill Leave U Overfucked","Like Metaphors If Baseball Had-A-Fifth-Base"//
Make U Experience How Blood-&-Fist-Taste,Son"Im Off The Hook""Kinda Like Renegade-Fish-Bait"!//
Weak Scriptures Get-Overpowered,"My Drops Fresh""Like The Thing That Slips In-Prison-showers"//
Fuk lames & Fukin-cowards!"Ill have U Pushin Up Daisies""Like U Were Benchpressin-Flowers"!//
U Defeat One?Dont Make-me-Laugh-Kid,"Son Dont Be Buggin""Like Wires Try-To-Endict-Feds"!//
I-Bite-Heads,On The Mic & Leave-It-Quite-Dead..."Over..Easy""Kinda Like How-I-Like-Eggs"!!//
So Quit Rap,Ur-Crap-Is-Worthless,"Ill Leave U Black & Blue""Like How African-smurfs-Is"!//
Fist To Cuffs Son-U-Worthless,"Cause I Bare Arms""Kinda Like The Opposite-Of-Skirts-Is"!//
Duce Step To Me????? Wait.. Son-U-Best-Not....//
Cause "Im The Best Man""Like Tate Was-To-Chestnut"...//

bye.
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Post by Lotus »

"Ill Leave U Black & Blue""Like How African-smurfs-Is"

lmao at that line... was an ight drop... some of those punches were way played out nd not rele hard hittin..

that eggs over easy shit was original too never herd that before
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Thats Funny..When People Try To Clown On My Looks..Yet I Still Get Bitches? Fine Ones To..Rather It Be Real Life..Net..It Don't Matter..

Pacman Line Is Played..
The Jokes were you attempted to be funny werent good...

Multis were cool tho..flow was decent..

This was not even ight... you lacked punches or any funny personals..
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Post by Haz »

Ill have U Pushin Up Daisies""Like U Were Benchpressin-Flowers"!//


That Was TOugh ... Lmfao ..


Over..Easy""Kinda Like How-I-Like-Eggs"!!//

Bang ..

Cause Thats The Only Time Youll-Get-To-Eat-T"!//

LoL Funny ..


You Had Some Played Punches Btu Some Were Tough ..
Liked The Multis .. Flow Was Coool .. Deff Nice For a First Drop ..
U Got Potential .. Keep Droppin .. I Wanna See this Beef Go Back N Forth
Cus there Isnt a Declared Winner Yet
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol multis were cool? nah.. got that backwards.. talentone ur slightly misusing dashes, the rhyme scheme wasn't bad but there was shyt that could've done without, few played lines, weak for a diss imo. overall it was alright.. has its potential in areas
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Post by Haz »

lol multis were cool? nah.. got that backwards..

LoL Yeah They Were Cool. U Dont Need Dashes In Every Little Spot...
I Know Your Multis Arent Much Better Then His ..
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Post by Phenom »

Compared to some shit he dropped in the cypher this was pretty good. (Seriously go look at that shit n you'll see)
Lmao @the pushin up daisies line. Not bad, but it's not good enough for you to be talking down on Duce's shit. Seriously.
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Post by Glamtrash »

This was okay, but nothing spectacular by any means. You could do a shit-ton better.
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