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Love Is A Very Risky Business

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Love Is A Very Risky Business

Post by Lotus »

i told her... "girl lemme sing you a song
ill get lost in the music n ill bring you along,
jus think of me when ya think you're alone...
i could salvage you when ya sinking below...
cuz a rose aint a thing without the ring down the road,
you are my missing link, please help me evolve,
we both got our problems that we each resolve..
baby you're the rock that keeps me strong,
baby you're the glue that keeps me together,
you are the rope that's keepin me tethered,
like time itself, i want you with me forever,
you are my life, i'd die if we were severed..
and if im a star, you're the fire at my center,
the spark to my heart, minimized to some embers..."
i let her in my heart n thas right where i left her...
nd even when I try not to get hurt,
the scar ensures that I would remember..
baby quit playin games, im tired of the guess work..
love is a sickness n it time it jus gets worse...
love is my business, be my best investor..
cuz love jus enrichens, baby check my net worth..
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Post by Glamtrash »

Definitely the best poem I've read from you. It's tells a beautiful story. The ending confuses me a bit, and I think that it throws it off, but for the most part, this is good.
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