Toical - Before and After - Topical

[Quix]

This about how times change, and how people change at different periods in there life!!






sooo.....without any further aideu....




i sit and just think Back to the days of the Mack and the Bladez
slinging Crack n the yay, its was hard to think past the black Mask for the jakez
Gatz packed for the raidz, as we'd Ride and tryed tah Earn our pay
as we Fryed the Herb away reminising of Times we'd jerk the gauge
the types tah work for pay, we put work in like the best of them
and those fake fuckz, who ain't buck, I was Certain i seen Estrogen
dem Youngins in our way, our semi's Tickled Babies, in the Early Eightys
we lived the Gang movies yah watch, and around more 'cane' then Cripple Ladies
AND around more Shells than Beached Whales, cuz against me your Fleet Failz
till yah Face is Flush and Cheeks pale, and your Braking down quick like cheep scalez
but times Change and Nigguhz do too, cuz when dah triggerz get Used
the figures don't Move, plus shots don't effect me like Cheep Liquer or Booze
My whole life i've been Sicker than Dudez, but it's mah Time tah Retire the heat
Retire the mask, hang up dah clipz n dah blades and Retire the Piece
time to inspire the Streetz; cuz they soft, you ain't hard like they got Lier Disease
mah New names the Sire Wid Keyz, no shit! its real piff, and you'll get Higher from these!
no more Desire for Greed, plus we broke our Ties wid the Cubanz
started dispising the shootingz, now we too busy getting High to our Music!
and the channel to the youth...yeah We're Trying tah Use-it

[Haz]

dem Youngins in our way, our semi's Tickled Babies, in the Early Eightys
we lived the Gang movies yah watch, and around more 'cane' then Cripple Ladies
AND around more Shells than Beached Whales, cuz against me your Fleet Failz
till yah Face is Flush and Cheeks pale, and your Braking down quick like cheep scalez


That Was Hott .. Just the Way It Was Stringed Together ..

I Get The Point Of This Topical .. But To Be Honest It Just Reminds Me Of One Of Your Normal Drops .. I Think You Should Exercise Your Creativity Quix..
Multi's Was Cool , Punchlines Were Cool .. But The Thing Is I Want a Story Or Some Kind Of Written That Just Pulls Me In Keep's Me Interested N Has Me Like ' O... Shit' ..

I Know You Can Do That .. Nice Drop .. But Not What I Was Personally Lookin For Family ..


Keep Droppin!

[Glamtrash]

It was alright, but not much improvement has happened between this and what else I've read from you. Bottom line -- I think you can do better.