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LAY U DOWN FEAT. ANONYMOUS & G-BABY

Post by HKX »

New track goin on Bonafide (Da Realness). Gotz dat Mexican feel 2 it mafia type beat dis is a track featurin my cousins on it. Leave sum feed and I'll do da same as well.

1st Verse: HKX
2nd Verse: Anonymous
3rd Verse: G-Baby
Hook: HKX


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Post by Brah-Vo »

Gahh !! THis was rtaw as hell fam !
I loved this track. I fell in love with the beat real talk.
The lyrics were nice and so was the flow.
8/10 dope track brah.
All 3 of ya came hard.
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Post by TreTru »

jyeah str8 fiyah hott dawg..real talk..
hook str8
verse 1 tight all around
verse 2 fell off a bit in some spots IMO but was strong overall.
verse 3 tight all aroud

DA BEAT HEINOUS...fukin sik..dope ass song REAL TALK..
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Post by Haz »

LoL "Im Really Lyrical" < Thats The Only Part I Had a Problem With
Cause Your Not Lyrical At All..

But You Had Nice Flow FOr The Most Part, Deff Gotta GOod Feel To The Track.
The Beat Was Hott... Second Dood's Flow Was Choppy As Hell... Alot Of Simple Punches On Dood's Part I Enjoyed His Attempts Wusnt Feelin Dood's Overall Verse Though.. Last Verse Was The Best... Lmfao Few Lines He Spit Made Me Laugh, Yeah Last Verse Deff Outshined Everyone... Simple Punches Here N There
BUt Deff Enjoyed The Verse.

Overall This Track Was Cool...
Keep Droppin
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Post by Petrafyne »

Hks Is Dope....
Just Shuffle The Secound Verse Last Or Cut It Out Completly....That's Trash.
Then This MIGHT Have Underground Potential.


..Snnifff....I Smell Pussy...Ha...
Da..Dumm....
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

hot shit, think g had the nicest verse imo., not sure who anonymous is lol.. other than whoever that is this track was pretty dope
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Post by Lawgix »

this joints fuckin HOT!!! i gotta agree with Haz n Tre anonymous fell off hella bad... but you and G Baby did ya fuckin thing for real... shit was hooooot... beat was str8 fire!!! some Godfather shit... haha... AME all day... good shit homie
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pussy??? positive criticism

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yea i agree i fell of pretty hard...i dont do this shit as much as i use to.
my lyricism is mad whack and lost all its infinite crushing power xD!! I can careless I'm to busy doing serious shit...did petrafyne call me pussy?? xD!! if you did nigga...I've done/been through situations that would make you shit your pants, ball into the fetal position and cry like a little bitch xD!!! if you didn't then i take back the comment... anyway as for all the other comments i take them all as positive criticism...tell me what i need to work/improve on peace
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Yomommaspimp wrote:yea i agree i fell of pretty hard...i dont do this shit as much as i use to.
my lyricism is mad whack and lost all its infinite crushing power xD!! I can careless I'm to busy doing serious shit...did petrafyne call me pussy?? xD!! if you did nigga...I've done/been through situations that would make you shit your pants, ball into the fetal position and cry like a little bitch xD!!! if you didn't then i take back the comment... anyway as for all the other comments i take them all as positive criticism...tell me what i need to work/improve on peace
i think if u came back n started writin a bit more... n did some more audios u'd be dope...
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I've been to busy lately over here in cali. I barely have to time to write anything. I fell off pretty hard dude i will admit that. i'm waaaaaaaaaaaaay to busy to be writing shit to beats right now and i will be for a while. but when i get a chance to i try but i have to much on my plate right now. i gave it a whack though lol it's been years man fuckin years since i have made a track.
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Yomommaspimp wrote:I've been to busy lately over here in cali. I barely have to time to write anything. I fell off pretty hard dude i will admit that. i'm waaaaaaaaaaaaay to busy to be writing shit to beats right now and i will be for a while. but when i get a chance to i try but i have to much on my plate right now. i gave it a whack though lol it's been years man fuckin years since i have made a track.
i think u got some pretty sick potential... for real... after u get ya shit str8'nd out get back to writin homie... it helps me to take stress off my chest... calms me down haha... but i feel ya... i work a full time job so its hard for me to write alot...
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good lookin on da feed niggaz
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