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^ ..Never Known For Dick Ridin ..
But Fat ass U Got yo Nerve ..
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Everytime Somethin Positive Is Said It's Dick Ridin LoL .
Don't Worry Rell .. When Me N K.O. Drop U Gunna See Lawgix Like "OMFG DUDE!! K.O. MERKED HIM1!!"
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cause KO is gonna merk u... :) and wtf u mean i got nerve???
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmao lawgix your fat... Fat niggas be having mic presence but u have none

And if u DIDN'T KNOW..Lumberjacks Run on logs while in water... as competition
To see who can hold their balance the longest


DUMB ASS..
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cause KO is gonna merk u... :) and wtf u mean i got nerve??? and dude ur lyrics are shit... none of that shit was fuckin creative... ur fuckin whack
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U Got yo Nerve Cus U are Known as Tha Fat AME Cheerleader Nukka .. Lol
Like Wtf?
Yo Fat Ass Be Hoppin From Stick to Stick in AME ..
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lmao... ur funny... so i'ma pretend this shitty thread doesn't exist either... PAYCE!!!! eat dicks... :)
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See And He Asked How He Was Biased Lmao .
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Post by Karnage »

wasnt really much of uh diss..too short..
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Post by talentone »

i read it again and tried to like it but it was still shitty
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Post by Glamtrash »

Lawgix is fat?

Anyway, yeah, it's too short. If you're gonna do something do it up 110% -- give it your all. This was lazy.

I suggest either a re-write, or, if you think you're better at audio than he is make it into a game. Games are fun.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

well... i mean it does say "mediocre version"... anyone really thinking this is good is full of themselves and they know it, i'll be real.. lawgix doesn't sound too smart with the way he says shit but he still makes good points about wat he's saying, as far as him being an ame cheerleader i dunno.. i don't exactly keep track of wat people say.. he was kinda dead for a while so its hard for me to say much based on wat IS said

reguardless.. this was weak.. way too short.. and i've seen better from u, y u would drop this?.. i have no clue, i can't say im not disappointed, u were up on top for a while n u fell off.. as did i, of course my hostility is kept to a low minimum
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Post by K.O. »

this was a horrible attempt at anything....personally if you're gonna diss somebody especially in text. you're not doing audio so you already gotta come like 400 x rawer. this was just way way short and i didn't see anything that stood out. thank god it was short. lol
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Post by talentone »

yeah this was a piece of shit x10000
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Post by K.O. »

talentone wrote:yeah this was a piece of shit x10000
lol more like a million X suck balls
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