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Post by eMCee Havic »

a song i did in 05' on some old dr. dre shit peep it
<div>
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/ModernDefiance'>
<div></div></a>
<div><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
<param name="menu" value="false">
<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=7316779&scid=7316779&q=hi&ext=1">
<param name="scale" value="noscale">
<param name="salign" value="b">
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000">
</object></div></div>

apreciate some feed on this, please
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Post by Lawgix »

again pretty sick... kinda fell off at parts... but just basically the same feed i left on the last track... good shit rate this 7/10
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Post by Young K »

i don't really want to criticize it because it's from '05...
but it's not bad your flow is sick on this, and that's about all lyrics were nice...

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Post by drunken jesus »

wtf did you EQ the low frequencys out of the beat? lol the kicks and the bassline are like nonexistant
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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hes playin the beat like hella loud... thru the microphone cause he doesn't have a recording program...
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yea its old to now my fuckin mics suck with the programs it sucks
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yea its old to now my fuckin mics suck with the programs it sucks
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