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What do you dislike most about writing?

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Tryin to Start a Verse Off ..
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

staying on point..sometimes theres so much u can write about a topic
but in the end u have to re-read it like..is this really relevant?
ball it up start again..but it all depends on what ur writing about really
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Post by Phenom »

I dislike how hard it is to construct that opening line too, but what I hate the most is how when you initially write something it can seem hot, then you read it the next day and your like “WTF?â€
I'm not going to battle you..But I do prefer it if my prey put's up a fight.


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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Nothing. I Like it all together.
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i Hate How There's No Limits On How Much u Can improve Something. Say u Write a Bar Then u Think Of a Better Multi To Throw at The End, So u Change The 2nd Line, And it's Better. But if u Nitpick Hard Enough Everything Can Be improved And u Just Eventually Go 'Ah Fuck it' And Drop it.
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Post by precise »

i gotta agree with phenom, ill write somethin n think its decent, then look at it maybe half an hour later n i hate it lol
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Post by Omega Bill »

Scrips? Love it.

Battling? I have a shit-ton of great wordplay, nameplay, and punches but it seems as if I just can't word them right to hit hard enough.
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Post by Haz »

Gettin Concepts Across.. U Can Think Of Some Hott Ass Concepts And Not Know How To Word Them So The Shits'll Hit...
And Also.. SOmetimes U Write Somethin N Feel Shit is Fuckin Fire.. Show It 2 Some1 N They'll Say Its Decent..
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Post by K.O. »

that its not a freestyle.
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|.R.SON.aLL.| wrote:Tryin to Start a Verse Off ..
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Post by The Gonz »

K.O. wrote:that its not a freestyle.
No doubt.

I think the hardest thing is getting started. That's why I hit cyphers more often, its easier to just go off someone elses rhyme scheme and not have a central topic. I could sit and come up with sick ass multies all day long without a problem whatsoever, and flow is second nature to me. But taking both of those and combining them, and trying to add meaning to it, that becomes a challenge most times. I eventually just nitpick it to death until its more basic than it was because I got so focused on multies that I watered down the story/meaning. I HATE writing battle verses, one of the main reasons I don't battle anymore. I'm all about personals because they hit the hardest, I'm not a fan of generic punches that could be used on anyone, so I'd just get stressed writing so I just quit doing battles. Not worth it IMO. I don't need to battle to earn respect.
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when u cant think of a good enough rhyme to start the verse with everything seems hot then stupid later
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
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Post by Lawgix »

i hate before ya write... your sittin either at work or away from ur pad n pen... and you know ur gonna write a song... and u get that tight first bar... and u get home and u forget it and ya write somethin whack lmao
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the time it takes to do it
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