(Tobacco..It Takes Lives..)

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:33 pm

tobacco takes lives
everyday it just takes live
it snatches with aggression
no mercy is given
its kills like a bad pain
what can i say?
its reign will never fade
its flow will remain like the everglades
murder is against the law..
but theres no rule against suicide
so they inhail..
inhail a cloud of death..
where the unknown lyes
with no profile...
they inhail...
a future of nightmares and hard days..

Tobacco kills...
its kills....

will no one get angry and take action?
its been killing me slowly...
i finally kill't it...

eMCee Havic · Post by **eMCee Havic** » Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:48 pm

lol im smoking a cigarette right now

but it does kill, but theres 3 trillion people on earth!!!!

people need to die

K.O. · Post by **K.O.** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:37 am

KO "smoking newports religiously since 2000."

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 9:47 am

newports... those are the shit!!!!

K.O. · Post by **K.O.** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:49 am

Lawgix wrote:newports... those are the shit!!!!

OH OF COURSE. THEY'RE THE FUCKING BEST CIGARETTES IN THE WORLD!
IM GOING TO HAVE ONE RIGHT NOW. LOL
"I GOT A HUNDRED BLUNTS AND A BUNCH PIFF CUZ I SMOKE NEWPORTS, NEWPORTS" HAH

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:05 pm

I'm also smoking right now, and I wouldn't say it's because I'm suicidal lol. (eight buxx a carton bitchezzzzzz)

I get your point though. As a venting piece, this was good, as a well thought out structured poem (which I'm assuming it's not meant to be anyway), not so much. My guess is you threw it here because it wasn't a scripture. It's cool.

4.5/10.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:18 pm

Double.FL wrote: eight buxx a carton bitchezzzzzz)

8 dollars for a carton of smokes huh???

lemme pull out The Gay-O-Meter

Gomez Gimme The Final Answer Please!!!

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:23 pm

I'M FUCKING BI YOU FUCKIN FUCK.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:26 pm

Double.FL wrote:I'M FUCKING BI YOU FUCKIN FUCK.

not according to the Gay-O-Meter... don't make me give u its reading again...

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:26 pm

ur face is gay

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:28 pm

ur face is... BI!!!

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:29 pm

Not even in your wettest of wet dreams.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:31 pm

hey don't u go and spoil my fuckin dreams!!!

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:33 pm

Fuckin dreams result in wet sheets due to lack of getting laid.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:37 pm

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