Understand

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:04 pm

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take a second now and vision the road
while i expose the gravel and grit by the tip of your toes
put your sandles to the side while we walk on this path
and look slowly at the farmers cutting all of their grass
you see this journey i provide to you is nothing but real
facts unveiled from the grain off the front of the mill
something to spill malt liquor and blood for our daily departed
mailing a martyr for ashes that remain in the garbage
i have a lot of scars to open and bare in this world
starting with care for the girls that i compared to a pearl
love left me confused among stress as i spewed
my best interest on a terrestial cruise
i was so caught up as an effectionate dude
that i couldnt tell the difference between the lessons and rules
You, know who im rapping bout the one i made a song for..
and later despises once repeated on a sound board

right about now i feel stupid by writing this track for you
bet you loved it when them haters had spoke of that wack boy who
gave you the time of day any other nigga would laugh it
still i put up with your shit..just like an asscrack
i never thought i would be dating a hoe
to be honest im not astonished our relationships closed
i dedicate this to..oh,forget the acronyms your nothing now
who would have known joel to snuggle with a subtle clown
at least i know your history but thats shits gross enough
you chose to put more flags in your hand than a local postal truck
its time i opened up about the way you treated me
you slept with 5 niggas at once, please have some deceny
then you try to speak to me to make the stories leave evasive
sorry to say but i heard it was more than 3 occasions..
you dont owe me an apology,honestly
cause from what i know love doesnt exist in a hoes philosophy

every phase feels like lonely day proposing rage
most times i go insane or mope and throw my notes away
than hope the solar rays dipose whats wrote in scolding flames
getting rid of whats left of my olden brain from golden days
still my vocals stay in the mixcraft with riff raff
that i once delivered open handed just like a bitch slap
how could i kid that depression is a friend to me
we have our ups and downs, depending on our energy
she tends to say i think to much of myself
and nothing would help my persona if i comfort her health
on other occasions it must be confusing she says im soothing when in happy thoughts
which should i choose this is tacky ya'll
the sadness makes me feel good inside
but when im glad its like the acts make the lord cry and seal up the sky
and the rain falls on my scalp taking me back again
to the times i'd weep,before letting the laughing vent

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:23 pm

damn
this shit was nice
real deep shit man
i can relate to something like this
u gotta send this to me
or make it downloadable n ur soundclick

9/10

(please leave feed on my track "Loosing My Breath"

Philosopher Stone · Post by **Philosopher Stone** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:32 pm

happens to the best of us... keep written its the best way to pass time, and the goal is to top ya last rhyme haha

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/off-t ... 12066.html

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:34 pm

thanks for the feed you guys much appreciated..and yea i gotchu guys on feed.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:38 pm

dude the track u posted was totally sick man... loved the lyrics... hook was on fire... was most deff some crack... good shit homie... keep postin... i think ur the one in the audio battle for the audio belt... if so can't wait to hear ya battle dude... peace

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:40 pm

yea thats me in the audio battle..im not showing for that tho since its really not a battle and plus i was to busy..thanks for the feed though.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:47 pm

might wanna let the other ppl in the battle know then... haha

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Wed Jan 28, 2009 3:57 am

this song is fire dope lyrics n shit
real prescense on this track
had a dope flow dope beat an the rhymes were great
nicely done J i also love that murda muzik thats dope aswell
keep'em comin

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:09 am

thanx for the feed guys.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:19 pm

track was pretty dope, i figured u were busy n wouldn't make it on time still kinda wish i knew u weren't showin for sure so i wouldn't have dropped for nothin, but n e ways.. this shit was pretty deep

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:50 pm

thanks for the feedback man.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:45 am

Damn.. This Track Is Tough...

Love Doesnt Exist Ina Hoes Philosphy!!....
Hope That Shit Wasn't True If So it Was Dirty As Hell...

But This Track Was Jus Raw, The Delivery Was Fire... Expression Wus Shown..
Punches N Wordplay Were There, Sorta Feeled Like U Outshined This Beat...

Shit Was Deff a Tough Track Homie... I Still Fuck With 'One Time?' Or Some Shit Like That.. The Best...

Dynamiq · Post by **Dynamiq** » Thu Jan 29, 2009 3:41 am

thanks for the feed my man appreciate it.

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:16 am

yo can u feed my Loosing My Breath Track?

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:41 am

Yo D dis shit is nice dawg liked wat u did wat da track also liked how u was talkin in da background when da hook come in shit makes u get ur point across. Good shit bro u got off on dis bro 4 real no lie gotta give dis a 10 Haz is right as well u did outshine da fuck outta da beat ur flow and ur whole style went wit dis shit. Keep droppin my nigga

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