TC vs Deathwish

TC · Post by TC » Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:26 am

4-5 bars
cats?
wordplay
nameplay
complexity
flow
enjoyment

Deathwish · Post by **Deathwish** » Fri Jan 23, 2009 5:30 am

noted TC tryin to be Top Cat voted EZ provin his shit lacks
so we're takin it to combat, it don't matter whereat
rhymes rolled over him flat, times tolled for a new doormat
primes foretold a coming splat, crimes unfold killin of a gnat
even though the facts are cold that his tracks are old
that my impact would behold that my macs could mold
he was on the threshold never had a good foothold
cause he is clearly outsold his fall marked in my fanfold

TC · Post by TC » Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:47 am

Im here to make things perfectly clear
that im gonna come out shaowin no fear
deathwish wants to pop off by mentioning my name
man someone give some rhyming skills to this lame
if death is what you wish for i want you to close your eyes
now keep them closed cause you're about to get a big suprise
now im bout to tell you a little somethin
I just bust a nut in your eyes so u could see me comin
You beating me is in an alternate reality
but this is Mortal KOmbat and i just performed a fatality

(sry so late death wish workschedule changed)

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:03 am

wordplay - none
nameplay - DW
complexity - None
flow -DW
enjoyment - none

well this was a terrible battle no offense
ya both need to work on ya punches n shiit

vote:DW

1 !LL B!tch · Post by **1 !LL B!tch** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:04 am

wordplay - None
nameplay - TC
complexity - None
flow - DW
enjoyment - TC

I give TC this battle he had stronger content for what it's worth
Do think deathwish had better rhymes and flow, but no puns & all that
It was a close call on enjoyment but I think puns do take more thought
It could go either was and was a decent battle keep doing it boys!

TC GMFV!!

uneak_scriptz · Post by **uneak_scriptz** » Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:31 pm

wordplay - n/a
nameplay - n/a
complexity - None
flow - dw
enjoyment-honestly neitha
...but yall leavin 0ut da most important cats ina battle.
punches-dw
personals-n/a
v/dw cuz he had betta punches but bof needs work

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:58 pm

2-1 Death wish leads

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Wed Feb 04, 2009 2:51 pm

wordplay: None
nameplay: None
complexity: dw
flow: dw
enjoyment: dw

vote: dw

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:49 am

wordplay - none
nameplay - Deathwish (for the top cat shit)
complexity - none
flow - deathwish
enjoyment - none

vote deathwish

weak battle. both verses seemed kinda similar. deathwish was slightly better in a couple cats which gave him the victory

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Thu Feb 05, 2009 1:14 am

Thank You Rai...n Cee4

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