Special Drop - Please peep

[Quix]

Heres to dah Dearly Departed who died as Merley a target
who knows, maybe Nearly n Artist...BUT now just a Puddle of blood
once A Couple in love, deep in dah trenches; troops Stumbled in mud
Troops, Humble in Trust! up against an army...with just a Bundle of Us
On dah Front Line, Aiming dah Semi, blazing grazing there Hemi!
2 seconds later, your best friend from childhood getz slained in the belly
crying out, dah pains gettin heavy as you drag-em a side God Damn He''s alive
A Patriot till the death; and will die wid dah mirror image of his flag in his eye
After the Passionate Fight; he was Devoted to change battling dah most Ferocious of Gangz
dodging bullets, looking to flea the scene but they Exploded tHE train
fighting for freedom, escaping a time where they Voted in Vein
but propz to the troopz, you made it possible fo us to write Dropz in the booth
hang wid our Popz as a youth, or head to da dealership fo Coppin a coup
so lets stray from dah gunz for today, and cherish the fresh air and Sun in yah face
they died winning, over the sinning selfless individuals who Won for our Race

[Haz]

A Patriot till the death; and will die wid dah mirror image of his flag in his eye
After the Passionate Fight; he was Devoted to change battling dah most Ferocious of Gangz
dodging bullets, looking to flea the scene but they Exploded tHE train
fighting for freedom, escaping a time where they Voted in Vein
but propz to the troopz, you made it possible fo us to write Dropz in the booth
hang wid our Popz as a youth, or head to da dealership fo Coppin a coup
so lets stray from dah gunz for today, and cherish the fresh air and Sun in yah face
they died winning, over the sinning selfless individuals who Won for our Race


That Part Was ill, I Loved The "Flag in His Eye" Line... shit Went Real Tough.
Emotion Was Brought Homie , Sorta Felt At First U Could Of Stringed The Story Type Of Piece Together Better Feel Me... But!... U Really Brought It Togetha ya Second Half I Was Digggin This.. It's Different Then Ya Usual Drops.. Which Show U Can Be a Writer Or Are One... So Show Us Ur a Writer Homie.
This Was Pretty Nice I Liked The Topic, Quit Focusin So Much On Multis.. like When U Do Put Um There In ya Topical Piece try N Make Sure They All String Together And Flow Like a Narator Was Tellin The Story...

Aiight... B E Z 1.

[MagicMark]

nice bro..

like haz said, was different than your other ish, so thats good..

flag in the eye line was tight.. cant complain about that.. topical itself was good.. good lines and a decent message... flow and multis where cool..

"slained in the belly".. was pretty forced.. but that going to happen with a multitude of multis

shit was nice tho.. keep dropping

(can you drop a vote in my sincerely battle, chea's)

[Quix]

Respect to both ya'll!

ppreciate the Explained feed!



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Heres to dah Dearly Departed who died as Merley a target
who knows, maybe Nearly n Artist...BUT now just a Puddle of blood
once A Couple in love, deep in dah trenches; troops Stumbled in mud
Troops, Humble in Trust! up against an army...with just a Bundle of Us

dope multies there and sum dope feeling deep shit quite different but good

On dah Front Line, Aiming dah Semi, blazing grazing there Hemi!
2 seconds later, your best friend from childhood getz slained in the belly
crying out, dah pains gettin heavy as you drag-em a side God Damn He''s alive
A Patriot till the death; and will die wid dah mirror image of his flag in his eye

shhiit this was fire the last line was dope i can't express how much i liked this shit

After the Passionate Fight; he was Devoted to change battling dah most Ferocious of Gangz
dodging bullets, looking to flea the scene but they Exploded tHE train
fighting for freedom, escaping a time where they Voted in Vein
but propz to the troopz, you made it possible fo us to write Dropz in the booth
hang wid our Popz as a youth, or head to da dealership fo Coppin a coup
so lets stray from dah gunz for today, and cherish the fresh air and Sun in yah face
they died winning, over the sinning selfless individuals who Won for our Race

man this wasnt quite as good as the other two bits i fed but it was still stong an had sum feeling to it

nice drop quix i hadda go to this amount of feed cus this was dope

[Quix]

THANKS Hos!

-- Wed Jul 14, 2010 6:46 am --

don't lie to the kids dog ... you love my writtens.


peep yah comment above and stop hating on me cuz i son you on the regular!
lmfao