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ReTr0 GaMiNG prod. by Raz-Pro

Post by K.O. »

This is the title track off The ReTr0 GaMiNG Ep.
Beat production by: Raz-Pro
Written and Recorded by K. Owens
Mixed and Mastered by: R. Bueno aka Kurse

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^ uppin dat new shit myyy bittttchheess!!! lol
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Post by MagicMark »

LOL at opening.. bringing back memoires.. sick shit on the beat.. funny.

your voice is unusual... flow and punches are pretty cool.. rhyming is cool.. divorce is pretty funny.. not in stores rhyming is nice.. traffic lol..

beat is cool, kinda lil grimy.. good shit man..

i'd make the hook a lil more distinguishable.. it was kindal ike half song half freestyle which was a lil odd

overall.. beat is crazy.. and lyrics and flow and presence where all solid..

impressive..
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Post by K.O. »

word good lookin on the feed mark.
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Post by Haz »

This Was Alright .. What The Hell Is Up With Your Chorus? Lmfao It Was Mad Corny, Your flow ok... The Punches u put out were played and just ass "pilin up like leafs" come On Now... No Real concept To This joint it seemed like U Had a few shrooms wrote a Lil went In The Studio and came Out with Some Clown Shit... Anyways Keep Droppin.


By Da Way U Look Like a Lepracon.
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Post by K.O. »

hah. the two times you have ever quoted my lyrics from tracks you have misquoted which i find to be funny. so for that ignorance i thank you little high schooler and also i found out that leapercans are taller and weight more than indian snake charmers. and as far as the hook goes your opinion about shit means shit to me. last time i checked you've never recorded a hook.
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Post by Haz »

I Have Kid , You Should Of Just Made Somethin More Out The Concept.
Like Of The Beat, Feel Me you Get a Beat Like That go Spazztic you Sorta Did Some Average Shit It Didnt Work, Dont Like How I See It Good For You.
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Post by K.O. »

im just trying something different. its experimental. im glad you dont like this one because youll hate the next one more. and usually that means a good thing. the next concept for this ep is going to be an electro-pop hip-hop record and phantom potomus produced some crazy custom shit for me that i could never picture anybody rapping to. lol
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Post by Haz »

I'm Sayin when you take Goofy ass beatz Like this do some creative shit With it Instead of Rappin the Same Shit U Would Put Ona Hard ass Beat.
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Post by K.O. »

uppin for feed. im gonna greet the haters in open arms with the clip out.
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Post by TreTru »

off the start the whole nintendo gamin intro was tight..
def a throwback on dat..this beat was mad crazy kid..

fuckin delivery seemed pretty spot on IMO..mad props.
vocs were mixxed well enough, i was feelin alot of the
hits n transfers in there. good rythm..

i honestly think you could fire this hook up..and if you did,
the shyts got mad potential to get ya ass a few duckets...on da real
alot of people could relate with the old school game sounds
and kinda new school rhyme schemin IMO.

all in all a dope drop..waitin to hear more..
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Post by K.O. »

dope tre thanks for the feed. plenty more where that came from.
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Post by HKX »

KO I'll leave u sum feed asap dawg a nigga is makin money right now u kno how dat is lol
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Post by Viral »

awww shiet..haha..shit came out dope man..i totally forgot wat dis track sounded like..haha beats raw...ur flows on point..i def like this shit..i like them effects kurse put on ur adlibs n shit...came out tight....now get ur ass over here so we can record on my new board!
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Post by K.O. »

word word def wanna hit up dat new equip dawg. ill be there this week. cuz i got shit to do dis weekend!!!! hah
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