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why im lyrically ill ...

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first of all
respect to the few that got the chance to get on this page
but be warned im lyrically full of rage
my mind set is insane
perfectly flawed and full of pain
when i rhyme its like a virus
taking over your body and ripping out your eye lids
techniques are nothing to me
just listen to what i gotta say lyrically
the voices that i hear inside my head
are of the evil dead !
so if you wanna battle me
be prepared for the ultra voilence that im about to bring
ill take the guy thats winning all these battles and remove his cranium
pronounce myself king !
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Post by 1 !LL B!tch »

It was pretty lightweight but fun to read.
I hope you keep at it, bring about a bit mre creativity. Peace
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Post by Houdini »

thanx homie
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