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I'm Alchwitz with constant news about German Jews,
writing rhymes, defining terms like "The Blues".
Bodies that leave no clues. Ashes to ashes
Rest in peace. Families in grief, strong beliefs
Scream and shout. Get it out before nuclear fallout
knowledgeable about such things. I'm beyond any doubt
day in, day out with thoughts well thought out
I'm guttering out with it, fans mutterin and stutterin about it
Slash through my past, insatiable as an hour-glass
With infinite eyes...Why doesn't Christ watch the night?
Fighting flares, outside Gaza City.
Pandora's Box opens, troops need reasonable care.
Hamas and Islamic Jihad groups engaged.
Political bosses...subatomic threats arranged.
Control of civil disobedience...an expansion of the Islamic state.
while al-Qaeda attack's increase infant mortality rate.
An equivalent weight found in our own countries unemployment rate
That shakes the very foundation the human eye sees in creation
I'm Lucifer forsaking mass, an alien without a Roswell crash.
A drunk driver leaving windows smashed.
The new flash dodging the law when I dash
standing on bitchs beat down at a liquor shop
Mockin the mother-fucker from a parking lot
This fag thought he was hot.
Till his head wiped the floor like a god damn mop
Left him in shock, staring passively
as the bitch we fought over hugs the toilet endlessly
God end-this-'he', with the sodomy needed to stomp a bloodline permanently
A little off topic, yeah I know. But what yeah gonna do...
My thoughts that breakthrough aint passive, like mother fuckin Hindus.
- If I can't bend Heaven, I shall move Hell. -
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Post by precise »

hmm, not bad, not your best drop tho thats for sure
i can see your trying to rhyme more than u used to
as usual tho i did find your views interesting, youve usually got a pretty interesting way of putting things
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fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Def-init »

You would be right in the fact I am trying to add more rhymes to my drops.
I think personally I am just fuckin it up thou lol. My message seems to come across better in my normal style of writing.
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