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1 !LL B!tch (vs) -.HaZarD.-(!LL Bitch)

Post by 1 !LL B!tch »

5 Bars - 10 Lines
Due 24 Hours From NOW.
No Feeding/Hate or Love Votes/ n` All That
We Both Will Drop ASAP!!

HaZarD's Choice Of Cats:
Punches
Nameplay
Wordplay
Multis
Flow
Complexity
Consistency
Enjoyment
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Post by 1 !LL B!tch »

*One In The Chamber*


I Come With Aim & Stun His Brain, Sleep On A Threat? Let HaZ Capatalize On Z's & I'm Done With Names
This Hun Is Flame! But Son Is Lame, Sprintin` With Monopoly & Chess Just Ta` Say He Run With Game!!

Ya Raps Crumble, Cats Mumble & Facts Fumble, R.I.P. Ova Ya Image Like Stack Bundles
Act Humble! Lookin` Down A Gats Tunnle, Brotha`s See Me Push Out A Big Guy Like Shaq's Uncles!!

Blllllllaaaaaaaattttttt!! RUMBLE!!!

I'm Clearly Strapped, So Fear Me Rap, Liars Said HaZ Throw Punches But They Mearly Slaps
See How Queer He Act & My Theory Mapped, Doin` Mixtapes? He Only Pump A Buzz If Beer Be Tapped!!

Pop Quite Meaner Shots Ta` Trash Men, He In Demos For Pipe Cleaners Watch This Haz`Ben[d]
Out? I Knock His Ass In, My Plot Is Pass Win, Murder! Put His Fam In Black Like Gothic Fashin`!!

Life Taken... Fuck Lendin` Me Breath, I Glare At A Washed Up Dick Like When Women See Hef
Let Me In & He Left, My Tendecy Death. Hazord Aint Ill, Bitch! Unless It Was Idenity Theft!!

Fall Back!!

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

don't think he's droppin for this..usin this to up so he can see just in case
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Of Course I'm Droppin It's Up To iLLY!, If She Wanna Hit Me With Tha Late Votes... i'll Drop Tonight ..
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[align=center]You Know ..

Looks Like The Skills Rusted In Da Fraud..Thinkin U Can Beat Me U Mus Get Dusted While ya Baurd...Whos Tha Best?
Only Time They Scream 'iLL BITCH!' There Disgusted With a Braud...

Look..

i'll Amp-atate Ya handz N plates, Sand Ya waste... Fam Ya Ate Unless U 'Pick Ya Lines Up' Like Drivin 2 Buy a Gram a Bass..
FRONTA FUCK YA WRITIN.. i'll 'Throw In Ya In Da Box' Like a RUNNA UP FA TYSIN!...

I Bring Death Static Its a Vets Habit I'ma Have iLL-E Pickd Apart Like Sharin a X Tablit......i'll Have This Pess Bagd Quic..
Tell Ha Flee Ha State N 'Hit Tha Keys' Like a Mad TEXT ADDICT!..

Yeah..
She'll Be Missin i'll Tom Hanks Da Plot Watch Ha Stumble Like She Drank Alot..Girl i'll Spank Ya Twat
So Wen Niggas Say 'Haz Ripped Tha Pussy' Like a Light Charge It AINT A SHOCK

How's This Trick Lethal..i'll Have Ha Potency Gone Like Flickd Needles..She Ain 'Good At All' Tryna Enflict Evil..
I Flick Wiesels..i'll Have 'ill Ness In Da Ground' Like A Graveyard For Sick People!!....[/align]
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

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1 !LL B!TCH



I Come With Aim & Stun His Brain, Sleep On A Threat? Let HaZ Capatalize On Z's & I'm Done With Names
This Hun Is Flame! But Son Is Lame, Sprintin` With Monopoly & Chess Just Ta` Say He Run With Game!!



LoL....Pretty Decent Concept..Kinda Hilarious To...Multis Were On Point
Overall decent Bars..for good flow..and a decent punch



Ya Raps Crumble, Cats Mumble & Facts Fumble, R.I.P. Ova Ya Image Like Stack Bundles
Act Humble! Lookin` Down A Gats Tunnle, Brotha`s See Me Push Out A Big Guy Like Shaq's Uncles!!


Opening Line was smooth...LoL @ the second line... aight line..
concept was kinda eh/eh...coulda been worded better IMO



Blllllllaaaaaaaattttttt!! RUMBLE!!!

I'm Clearly Strapped, So Fear Me Rap, Liars Said HaZ Throw Punches But They Mearly Slaps
See How Queer He Act & My Theory Mapped, Doin` Mixtapes? He Only Pump A Buzz If Beer Be Tapped!!


LoL!
Multis was on point(Could be more complex IMO)...punch was cool...creative..and humurous...



Pop Quite Meaner Shots Ta` Trash Men, He In Demos For Pipe Cleaners Watch This Haz`Ben[d]
Out? I Knock His Ass In, My Plot Is Pass Win, Murder! Put His Fam In Black Like Gothic Fashin`!!



Flow was good.. multis was cool.. punch wasn't really good here
i've seen gothic lines like that... just with diff concepts..
overall "okay line"




Life Taken... Fuck Lendin` Me Breath, I Glare At A Washed Up Dick Like When Women See Hef
Let Me In & He Left, My Tendecy Death. Hazord Aint Ill, Bitch! Unless It Was Idenity Theft!!



Lmao @ "Glare at a washed up dick like when woman see hef"

That line was funny as hell..but the punch lacked.. it was pretty much basic..

Overall.. not so good Closer....but a pretty decent verse overall..




Hazard




Looks Like The Skills Rusted In Da Fraud..Thinkin U Can Beat Me U Mus Get Dusted While ya Baurd...Whos Tha Best?
Only Time They Scream 'iLL BITCH!' There Disgusted With a Braud...



Multis was on point...cool flow... I Felt the punch could of been worded better...alrigh line
nice to see you not use like so much




i'll Amp-atate Ya handz N plates, Sand Ya waste... Fam Ya Ate Unless U 'Pick Ya Lines Up' Like Drivin 2 Buy a Gram a Bass..
FRONTA FUCK YA WRITIN.. i'll 'Throw In Ya In Da Box' Like a RUNNA UP FA TYSIN!...



Multis on point...I Liked that "Pick ya line up" Concept..IMO that should of been the punch..would of
Had more of an effect.... the punch was okay...coulda used better wording, and more complexity..



I Bring Death Static Its a Vets Habit I'ma Have iLL-E Pickd Apart Like Sharin a X Tablit......i'll Have This Pess Bagd Quic..
Tell Ha Flee Ha State N 'Hit Tha Keys' Like a Mad TEXT ADDICT!..


LOL...Nice multis....flow was thorough... the punch was good....
Quick ...Clean..and straight to the point



Yeah..
She'll Be Missin i'll Tom Hanks Da Plot Watch Ha Stumble Like She Drank Alot..Girl i'll Spank Ya Twat
So Wen Niggas Say 'Haz Ripped Tha Pussy' Like a Light Charge It AINT A SHOCK


Lmao @ I'll spank ya twat...thats my job my dude lol jk..lets get serious

Flow was cool.. so was multis.. punch wasn't really that effective there IMO




How's This Trick Lethal..i'll Have Ha Potency Gone Like Flickd Needles..She Ain 'Good At All' Tryna Enflict Evil..
I Flick Wiesels..i'll Have 'ill Ness In Da Ground' Like A Graveyard For Sick People!!....


Cool Multis..flow was cool...punch wasn't effective as it could of been my dude
try to work on wording... but then again i'm assuming you rushed this verse.
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Punches - 1ll Bitch (Better wording & A tad bit more complexity)
Nameplay - Hazard (He kept attacking 1ll's name)
Wordplay - 1ll Bitch..was nice with the universal name plays...
Multis - 1ll ..She had more multis Per Line.
Flow - 1ll..i think hazard rushed and really didn't fix his structure
Complexity - 1ll
Consistency - 1ll
Enjoyment - Both... they both came with humurous lines
Overall Vote - 1ll


Is that a cool break down for y'all?[/align]
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Post by Haz »

Ekoms Little Sentence Was Deleted, Wasn't a Vote there For a Freepost.

Phenom Read The BAttle Grounds Rules You Have to Have 100 Posts, Drop a Script , Introduce Yaself. Before Voting ... Duce i'll Take Ya Vote It Is Wut It Is...


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Punches Hazz (How's This Trick Lethal..i'll Have Ha Potency Gone Like Flickd Needles..She Ain 'Good At All' Tryna Enflict Evil..
I Flick Wiesels..i'll Have 'ill Ness In Da Ground' Like A Graveyard For Sick People!!....) Really was the only decent punch in the whole battle

Nameplay; Hazz
Wordplay; Bitch
Multis: Bitch
Flow; Hazz
Complexity: HAzz
Consistency: Niether
Enjoyment: Niether
Overall Vote: HAzz


weak battle in mah oppinion, seen better verses from both of you!


thats IMO...take my vote or leave it
Last edited by Quix on Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Haz »

Lol Fuck You Quix , Thanks For Voting.


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Post by 1 !LL B!tch »

Quix got high standards for us HaZ... Lol
How is that possible and he's not even that good?
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Post by Omega Bill »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:Ekoms Little Sentence Was Deleted, Wasn't a Vote there For a Freepost.

Phenom Read The BAttle Grounds Rules You Have to Have 100 Posts, Drop a Script , Introduce Yaself. Before Voting ... Duce i'll Take Ya Vote It Is Wut It Is...


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Aye, dude.

I saw Ekoms shit and it was a paragraph and he said you lost the battle. You don't delete shit like that.
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Post by Haz »

Son? He Said. "i'm not voting ... but" Thats Swayin What Chu Mean I Dont Delete Shit Like That?
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea i said i wasn't gonna vote, giving my opinion isn't swaying at all tho, i wasn't pointing out any factors that others could've said "oh he's right.. he did force that line" or " he makes a good point..she did have better punches" or anything along those lines that could alter someone elses vote, so technically.. it wasn't swaying at all..but its watever.. reason i didn't vote cuz somehow i'd be called out on hating...its no surprise from people who have issues with me
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Post by Hubris »

heres my breakdown...


HaZarD's Choice Of Cats:
Punches- bitch
Nameplay- bitch
Wordplay- bitch
Multis- bitch
Flow-bitch
Complexity- bitch
Consistency-bitch
Enjoyment-bitch
Overall Vote- Hazard..lol

na, bitch got this..catsweep..

it was closer then the breakdown shows, but literally and physically i thought she edged em all.. Hazard had some forced ass multies..and weak set ups....

props to both though..

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Post by Haz »

Correct^ , The Vote Won't Be Taken.. look Forward to Battlin you
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