still intrigued

[tounge]

[font=Comic Sans MS] I can speak your name in either text or numerals
its so unusual, to catch a glimpse as beautifu
as wat i gazed wen i pass'd forward my blessins
wen u read to decide ur question im breathless
i desire ur response to read and see you accepted
but wen its pass'd bak I flush n reply da message
u said u been damaged be4 n I'll be addin some more
pain u cant afford but with regards Im not that man of yours
as angles faithful to heaven I will aid you blossom
another girl is not an option, they want but I play possum
with us together I promise there is nothing between
its just we, cuz u gleem like diamonds which has me still intrigued [/font]

[real talk..]
now look, Im fed but my stomach rumbles
a tree blows without wind, we're coupled
count backwards from none, Im there
we're both from shit and both was scared
I'll shred to pieces my skin, with scissors
to heal your salted wounds from that, Mr..

[- Mutual -]

okay
the begginging was good
more of poetry deep shit
had sum nice feeling into this
but the second but had a choppy flow
but dude this wasnt bad
keep'em comin