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Break Down Ft. Ekoms

Post by Viral »

Heres another for yall..me and Ekoms...track is bout the times we live in...peep it n leave me some feed..ill return it


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Post by -ViP »

ahh dang this is a nice track, Sounds like ya'll actually been rapping in the booth, ya'll other tracks didnt sound That good quality
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Post by The Gonz »

Pretty good track. Beat was alright. Lyrics were on point. I think Viral would sound better without the voice overs. Ekoms reminds me of Immortal Technique. Both of you sound a little monotone, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Overall, above average for sure. You guys got it, you just need to polish your styles some more and get that entertainment factor shining. Put some more emotion into your voice, let us feel that hunger.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

appreciate the feedback for this, ur the 3rd person to say i sound a lil like immortal technique lol, my solo sounds kinda like this too, i try to stray away from it but its my most comfortable approach on audio
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Post by The Gonz »

Do what you do, its pretty normal to sound like a cat if they influenced you. On the other hand, some may say you're biting his style. I say do what's comfortable. There's so many emcees these days, its impossible for some of us to sound alike. There's also a lot of cats that have shitty voices even if their lyrics are sick. Papoose comes to mind lol. Just be glad you sound like someone enjoyable.

On a side note, Nas and Immortal Technique did a show here in Minneapolis. Nas ripped on Immortal for spitting a "freestyle" that he used at a previous show, saying he wrote it. It was comical. IT got booed lol.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol never that, i don't force myself to sound certain ways, i do better with certain beats, if i lack motive i lack everything

i don't like immortal's freestyles, but he's pretty deep and controversial with his shyt, its not his voice that appeals just his context

good lookin on the feed, i got a couple semi-oldies that still need mixing by viral as well one featuring him, hopefully it'll be completed and released within the month
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the lyrics had sum dope feel to em
the beat went well with the type a song
the feeling went well and nice precesence
on the mic nice shit viral an koms
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by K.O. »

well my car wont break down but i need to find it first. hah
slackin on the feed. shit was nice..who produced? i like the laid back feel... fuck da government! now i sound like immortal technique lol verses were dope mixing sounds polished kudos viral. emphasis on the hook was perfecto. koms i like how you came off on this one, im seeing you come out of that shell more in the studio like we talked about at kurses last time we kicked it...yall held it down! keep it up koms n viral...out
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Post by Viral »

much appreciated on da feed yall...ill leave u guys some feed ASAP...cept KO..HA..HAHAA!..lol..

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Post by K.O. »

i dont need your feed bitch ive got enough hunger for the both of us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTERRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Viral »

find ur fuckin keys...and come record...
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Post by Lawgix »

i just heard this on ur myspace... this has gotta be one of the illest tracks i've heard u n Koms record... the beat was fire... the hook is sick... lyrics were dope as hell... this is the Viral and Ekoms i wanna see more often... nice shit man... keep it up...
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Post by K.O. »

yeah i know this is fucked up...im gonna go order one of those stupid infomercial keychain beepers so i never loose this shit again. maybe i gotta stop gettin so shit faced all the time..ahah yeaaaaaaa rittte. we need a new track for the peoples...the peoples...the peoples. so imma get on dat man asap
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Post by Viral »

^hurry da fuck up!



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excuses excuses, i'll buy u a piano so u always got spare keys
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