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The Magic Mark - "Gorgeous" Collection -

Post by MagicMark »

Time to throw my hat back into the punches league..

like i ever left..


im hot on ya case like burnt lawyers
and i spit a flamin' flow like the worst boilers
i ruin everyone else's game like first spoilers
cause i gotta big dick, its measured in verne troyers
im revered world wide for my blatant shit
i curse out every religion n' even atheists
they stealin' good money, those fuckers wastin' it
could do good, but its all profit, no one'll take the hit
every saviour is a contradiction, jus' face it bitch
if god lived in my block he'd be a satanist...
i punch brutally like early cage fighters
im so dope, n aint got haters, just "he alrighters'"
i aint "blowin' smoke" when i say i got the heat in my pocket..
and i got it on lock just like key's and lighters
im part of a movement called the freedom writers
we believe the righteous who bleed in cyhpers
imma a monster with text, and ya'll all in decline
you cats cant get near me, like restrainin' orders to felines
but imma nice guy, i'll give you's views with ya hearses
cause you the "type to get fucked" like what you do with ya verses (think)
i gotta pitcher game, i keep throwin' till ya batters is torn
i drop more weight than mrs bill when alpha was born
and umm.. get ya weight up, for' ya get slashed like a pay cut
look 'everything i drop is dope", so you expect to stay up (wow)
my words hurt like anal cause they'd break two cheeks,
n' ma punches make dudes weak
im so far above ya'll…for me to shit on you faggit's it'd take two weeks
fake crews be I pet hate, I have em' screamin' sayin “no way, Gâ€
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Post by - Mutual - »

ha
nice piece
sum really dope punches
nice flow to it
brought hot with multies
really good shit here

imma a monster with text, and ya'll all in decline
you cats cant get near me, like restrainin' orders to felines
but imma nice guy, i'll give you's views with ya hearses
cause you the "type to get fucked" like what you do with ya verses (think)

im revered world wide for my blatant shit
i curse out every religion n' even atheists
they stealin' good money, those fuckers wastin' it
could do good, but its all profit, no one'll take the hit
every saviour is a contradiction, jus' face it bitch
if god lived in my block he'd be a satanist...

some of my favourite bits

great shit mark
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Typical magic mark piece ! (not a bad thing)
Dont know really what to say on this piece.
Your flow was easy as usual and u had some hard punches and wordplay.
nice.
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