Conversation With Death, Part 1

[Brah-Vo]

[align=center]I Don't Know Or Understand Why I Choose To Bruise my Face
Livin A Lie is Like Findin Gold But The Truth Is Waste
Almost self delusional, pack the booze in case
Hardest decision i ever made was what pill to take
But i still chill with yae and i kill fa pay
I get the deal done
but momma still insist her son
kneel down and pray
I look at her cryin face .. i frown and say
"Aint nobody gonna save me today .."
She puts her withered hands to her face
Though i cant
take the guilt so i leave in haste
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I wander the cold streets.. the jungle i rule
i leave bodies with cold feet
And bring the thunder to fools
i leave them in better bliss then sex
Starin at his eyes so distant
it was i who kissed him
No more breath bereaves the kiss of death
Bring families to grieve and yet
They dont understand what it means to die[/align]

[Brah-Vo]

bump this omg

[- Mutual -]

this was a good read
the flow was consistent
but maybe fell off a lil in parts
had sum good multies
which thru the flow off a lil
but still was good
the subject was i think unique but
thats cus i aint seen anybody else do it
so props to ya on that
keep'em comin

[Brah-Vo]

thansk for the feed ... parts 2 and 3 coming up soon

[Brah-Vo]

upping

[Haz]

You tried To Flip your Style First Verse
I Didnt like it Personally, didnt Feel like it Brought That much Impact.
But i see You were still trying to come a Little Complex.. Keep workin on that

At First The Second verse was a Little scrambled in My eyes,
Then it got more Solid towards the End with The Kiss of death line

I Mean its a Cool topic you Should Do More With it Next time Fam.

TRy Workin With The Concept Again... What doesnt Kill You Makes you Better...

[Brah-Vo]

good lookin out on the feed haz. much appreciated all.
Just a lil more feed and part 2 and 3 go up

[Quix]

good read Dude....I liked it!