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Post by eMCee Havic »

fuck it,


my lyrical abilities speak through silioqies
with no apologies i spit script with intensity
you to dense to see,
the true poetry signed rappers be quoting me
you notice heat when the fire starts glowing green
im full of dreams,
but rappers allways hate on me but hatred breeds
focus to break the breeze so blatanly
i spit flows outragously,
and theres no stopping so pose caution
when yall see no options im the one whos flows dropping
i flow often
so this isnt hard for me cuz darkness breathes
like a shark wit teeth but im sharpe with speech
got young bitches screamin card me please
and i can do a hundred drops the rap juggernaught
tore asunder flocks with my rubber thought
the thunder stops
just to take a breath most break they necks
from this brazen text youll crave the rest
but can you brave tha test
im str8 phenominal punches are unstoppable
the abomidible rap that impresses all the uncommon folk
with my polished flows
so, breathe deep inhale exhale the frail will fail
a pale razell busting beatbox while hailed in jail
its a rabbit race and yall tailed the snails


just a rap ive been working on tell me what you think
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Post by The Gonz »

Not bad. Multies were on point. Flow was pretty good. Subject matter was fairly random but it'd sound good on a beat.
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