DeMoNiK

[eMCee Havic]

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im a decieving heathen demon got my peeps believin
i was seein gleamin reasons to comit some treason
got the season free an feindin so evil plots conceivin
rising past all achievents pleasing even the dark demon
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dastardly duo *boom* a catastophy
i mastered speech
while some suffer from atrophy
why are you after me?
because im stupendous hurendous
and full of tenacity
i'll bust a flow and open skulls
to inspect if i hold gravity
a shadow in battle ill rattle
your brain im pivotal
admit-im-cold when i spit-my-flow
my mission to make listens habitual
even the critics-know
that in this flow its factual
a natural and this style is actual
i gas-n-go to refuel n rap-some-mo'
its contageous
im outrageous cops will hate-this
cant contain it like sin in vegas
takin rapture from the bible chapter
you cant stop it or block it
you the slave and im the master

[Haz]

The Flow was Pretty Much on Point...
Only Thing is In The middle Some things seemed a Little Forced.
Overall This was a Decent Drop, your a GOod Edition To illest Fam
Keep Up The Good Work, & Next Time Try To Put a Lil More Complexity in ya Bars
I Like The Gas N Go refuel N Rap Some Mo.. Part.. Shit Was Coo.

Your Rhymin is Good , u Have a Grasp On Multis
I Mean your Structure is your Structure i'm Not gunna Pick At it,

Just try gettin More Complex, Use More multis if you Can...
Maybe a Few Punches.. Make sure u Have Nice Set Up's Though

Thats All i have to Say.. Keep Droppin Kid

[The Gonz]

Flow and multies were good. I liked some of the rhyme schemes and internals. Overall, pretty good.

[- Mutual -]

wasnt really feelin this piece
it was good but not really gettin the flow
maybe i'm not on the type of vibe that u got on
i dunno but some nice multies
not much too say worth readin at least
keep'em comin

[ScottJames]

was iiaght,,,lil simple for me
multis were pretty good 4 most part
flow was dope
ur bars r too short 4 my likes...
no h8

pz